J D Falk wrote:
 > Suggested new language in [brackets], for various sections:


Unless I've misread the suggested changes, they appear to be word-smithing, 
rather than raising substantive issues.

I tend to find that people who put the energy into reading carefully enough to 
be able to make word-smithing changes usually make good suggestions.

Does anyone see a change they don't like?

d/


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   Dave Crocker
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