> -----Original Message-----
> From: ietf-dkim-boun...@mipassoc.org [mailto:ietf-dkim-
> boun...@mipassoc.org] On Behalf Of Jeff Macdonald
> Sent: Wednesday, September 22, 2010 3:18 PM
> To: ietf-dkim@mipassoc.org
> Subject: Re: [ietf-dkim] draft-ietf-dkim-rfc4871bis
> 
> On Wed, Sep 15, 2010 at 3:46 PM, Dave CROCKER <d...@dcrocker.net>
wrote:
> > John, et al,
> >
> >      *****
> >
> >      Does anyone else have comments on the draft???
> >
> >      *****
> >
> 
> I just reviewed the diffs:
> 
> Section 3.9:
> 
> INFORMATIVE DISCUSSION: This document does not require the value
> of the SDID or AUID to match the identifier in any other message
> header field.
> 
> should "the identifier" be "an identifier"?
> 
> I cringed at SDID and AUID, but I don't have any better suggestions at
> the moment.
> 
> Reviewing the flow of the document, I suggest moving section 2.7-2.11
> to be after section 2.2.
> 
> 
> --
> Jeff Macdonald
> Ayer, MA

+1

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