I note this is information and not BCP and comments are sent in that context. 

Overall I like this - particularly section 6 which if far more actionable than 
many things I have read in the privacy space. 

Few comments ...

Should this explicitly mention the example of communication from women's 
shelters - I find this example a good one for thinking about many privacy 
problems. 

I realize that everyones time is limited, but it someone got motivated to 
provide a second example, I think OAuth would make a great example. 

Small comments ….

In "A natural person." the word natural seems really weird.Would "A human" be 
better?

The definition of 
     Personal Data:   Any information relating to an identified
      individual or an individual who can be identified, directly or
      indirectly.

made me read it several times before I got it. Does it mean 
     Any information relating to an individual who can be identified, directly 
or
      indirectly.

Might want to add "anonymity set" to section 3.1 

Typo "intermediairies" should be "intermediaries" ?



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