These 2 have been applied to my edit buffer > -----Original Message----- > From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Behalf Of > Harald Tveit Alvestrand > Sent: Friday, January 21, 2005 15:46 > To: ietf@ietf.org > Subject: Legal review 4: Minor editorial > > > Editorial Comments from Jorge: > > 4., 3rd paragraph below bulleted list: The 2-year term rule > does not apply > during the initial terms. Thus, this paragraph should start > out saying > "Subject to paragraph 2 of Section 4.2, appointed members...." > > 5.5: I think that the 2nd sentence is not clear, as it uses > the technical > accounting term "debited" in a way that doesn't exactly say > what I think > it's supposed to. I would rewrite it as follows: "Funds in > IASA accounts > shall be used solely to support IETF activities and for no > other purposes."
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