David, I have now inserted the Full Copyright Statement as in RFC 4748.
I have adjusted the lines to the 72 character format. I'll resubmit during the day with a couple of other corrections. Regards, jean-Pierre -----Original Message----- From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: vendredi, 18. janvier 2008 06:39 To: Evain, Jean-Pierre; ietf@ietf.org; [EMAIL PROTECTED] Cc: [EMAIL PROTECTED]; [EMAIL PROTECTED] Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt Reviewer: David L. Black Review Date: January 18, 2008 IESG Telechat date: 24 Jan 2008 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: The minor open issue and most of the nits identified in the Gen-ART review of the -01 version of this draft have been addressed in the -02 version. idnits 2.05.03 found two nits: Checking boilerplate required by RFC 3978 and 3979, updated by RFC 4748: ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ---- ** The document seems to lack an RFC 3978 Section 5.5 (updated by RFC 4748) Disclaimer -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching beginning. Boilerplate error? Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html: ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ---- ** There are 2 instances of too long lines in the document, the longest one being 2 characters in excess of 72. Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 [EMAIL PROTECTED] Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ---------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------------------- ************************************************** This email and any files transmitted with it are confidential and intended solely for the use of the individual or entity to whom they are addressed. If you have received this email in error, please notify the system manager. This footnote also confirms that this email message has been swept by the mailgateway ************************************************** _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf
