Hi Jerry

We will include in the Appendix a similar example as the one given in
Section 3.4 of the QSPEC draft.

Best regards,
Georgios

On 3/2/2010, "Gerald Ash" <gash5...@yahoo.com> wrote:

>One more comment:
> 
>Section 3.1 of the QSPEC draft 
>http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-nsis-qspec-24#section-3.1 lists 
>requirements for QOSM specifications including "QNE processing rules 
>describing how QSPEC information is treated and interpreted"and "at least one 
>bit-level QSPEC example".
> 
>While the RMD draft has examples in Appendix A of individual processing 
>functions, there is no overall, end-to-end example given of QSPEC composition 
>and processing from QNI to QNR and back again.  IMO this would greatly help an 
>overall understanding of RMD functionality.
> 
>Such QSPEC processing examples are given in Sections 4.4 ("Processing 
>Example") and 4.5 ("Bit-Level QSPEC Example") of the Y.1541-QOSM draft 
>(http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-nsis-y1541-qosm-10#section-4.4)
>and
>Section 3.4 ("Example of QSPEC Processing") of the QSPEC draft 
>(http://toolsietf.org/html/draft-ietf-nsis-qspec-24#section-3.4).
> 
>Thanks,
>Jerry
>
>--- On Mon, 3/1/10, Gerald Ash <gash5...@yahoo.com> wrote:
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>From: Gerald Ash <gash5...@yahoo.com>
>Subject: Re: [NSIS] Last Call: draft-ietf-nsis-rmd (RMD-QOSM - The Resource 
>Management in Diffserv QOS Model) to Experimental RFC
>To: ietf@ietf.org, n...@ietf.org
>Cc: "Jerry Ash" <gash5...@yahoo.com>
>Date: Monday, March 1, 2010, 2:20 PM
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>Minor editorial comments:
> 
>1. page 35:
>"  the "Peak Data Rate-1 (p)" value of the <Bandwdith> parameter.
>   When the QNE edges use aggregated intra-domain QoS-NSLP operational
>   states, then the "Peak Data Rate-1 (p)" value of the <Bandwdith>"
>substitute <TMOD-1> for <Bandwdith> 
> 
>2. page 101:
>"  directions by using the procedure described in Section 4.6.2.3 and
>   including in the  <Bandwith> parameter within the "RMD-QOSM QOS
>   Description" field carried by the "forward" intra-domain RESERVE the"
>substitute <TMOD-1> for <Bandwith>
> 
>Thanks,
>Jerry
>
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