Some suggestions:
Replace "delegate their responsibilities" with ", by written action, delegate specific responsibilities of their position". Add after "IESG and IAB respectively." "A delegation must be reconfirmed if a change in the scope of the delegation is desired." Replace "The terms of delegation..." with "The effective duration of delegation shall be selected by the delegator, but shall not extend past the end of that delegator's current term. Delegations may be renewed indefinitely." Add at the end "A delegation may be revoked with or without prior notice at any time by the delegating chair or CEO or by action of the confirming body." At 07:21 AM 3/30/2011, Olaf Kolkman wrote: >Dear Colleagues, > >I have just chartered a very short draft that intends to update BCP101. It can >be found at: >http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-kolkman-iasa-ex-officio-membership > >The draft is very short and contains only a few sentences of substance: > > The IETF chair, the IAB chair, and the ISOC President/CEO may > delegate their responsibilities to other persons. The delegations by > the IETF chair and the IAB chair need to be confirmed by the IESG and > IAB respectively. The terms of delegation is for a longer term for > instance aligned with the IESG and IAB appointment cycles (roughly > anual). > >John Klensin made me aware he also had a similar idea earlier: > http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-klensin-iaoc-member-00.txt > >The main difference is between his and this draft is that John's I-D makes the >person the chair delegates to a non-voting liaison. I have a small preference >for the IAB and the IESG keeping the control point, and I implicitly assume >that for IASA matters the persons delegated to will escalate to the chairs and >ask for specific guidance when appropriate. I realize that for the Trust >anybody serves on personal title. For the trust alignment with the IAOC >membership is just a practical considerations. > >The shared requirement is unloading the I* chairs and the ISOC president and >empowering the people that serve in that role to organize themselves. (I >should have paid more attention to this much earlier.) > >I plan to seek a sponsoring AD for getting this I-D published as a BCP >shortly. > >Assuming this is an appropriate list for further discussion, >yours, > >--Olaf > > >________________________________________________________ > >Olaf M. Kolkman NLnet Labs > Science Park 140, >http://www.nlnetlabs.nl/ 1098 XG Amsterdam > > > >_______________________________________________ >Ietf mailing list >Ietf@ietf.org >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf