In the interests of moving the document forward more briskly, here are my
comments as responsible AD.

Thanks,
Adrian

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I know it is not the intent of this document to propose solutions or
mitigations to any of the threats described. However, I think two things
would be useful:

1. Please add a statement of exactly this point to the Abstract and to
   the end of the Introduction.

2. Please consider adding a short section that may drive new work by
   suggesting which threats need to be addressed in new protocol work,
   which in deployment, and which by applications.

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The assumption stated in the Introduction...
   This document is based on the assumption that no additional security
   mechanism (such as IPsec) is used in the IP layer.
...is perfectly fine. You might add a note to explain why this is a 
reasonable assumption (i.e., it is particularly hard to configure
security associations in this type of network) and you might also add a
note about whether none, some, or all of the threats would go away if
this problem could be resolved.

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