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Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.
Document: draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: July-07-2013
IETF LC End Date: July-17-2013
IESG Telechat date: August-15-2013
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational
RFC, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits]
This draft defines DNS Resources Record Types for encoding IEEE 802 EUI-48
and EUI-64 addresses. Potential privacy issues with this scheme have been
soundly beaten to death with extreme prejudice.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits:
Page 1, Abstract, 1st paragraph: After "e.g.", append a comma and delete an
extraneous space before "Ethernet".
Page 3, Introduction, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "This" to "These"
and change "specification defines" to "specifications define".
Page 3, Introduction, 2nd paragraph: append a comma after "e.g.".
-Peter Yee
