Hi Binny, First of all thanks for taking the time to come up with the manual for installation. I have gone through the manual and I have some thoughts/comments -
First of all I think this is a good manual for the entry level user who simply wants to install Fedora on their computer. If this is the intended audience then I believe you should also include instructions on partitioning an existing windows system and setting up dual boot since a lot of your audience will likely be wanting to use this option. Please also mention in the beginning of your manual that the user BACKUP their data - some people may not realize that the default install you have shown in your manual will partition their HDD and any existing data will be lost - it is better IMO that you mention they BACKUP before starting the install process just in case something unforeseen happens and their HDD becomes corrupt. If this manual is intended to be a comprehensive one regarding the various options available in the install process then you need to mention the other options available in each step (for example - screenshots for the advanced partitioning process, and for adding or modifying software) - this will show users all the options available (you can always recommend which is the default and easiest way :-)) An explanation of some of the terms might be helpful to some of the users (especially new ones) - for example - what is a partition? what is a hostname? what is a repository? I think you have done a very good basic framework - all that's needed now is a little extra polish to make it so much more useful :-) One approach to do this is to describe a typical target system (Hardware specs - (Pentium, 512MB RAM, 40GB HDD) and software - Windows XP, MS Office) that you want to convert and then you can detail both dual boot and complete replacement options. Again Kudos for the effort - BINNY Sincerely - Nikhil On Mon, Feb 9, 2009 at 7:43 AM, Prasad SR <sayspra...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > Apart from this, how about doing a one page installation manual? Which will > be focused on dual boot. And we can afford taking a print out and passing it > over to people @ install fest along with the corresponding distro they opt > for.. > > > -- > -- > Regards, > > Prasad.S.R > > "Many will call me an adventurer - and that I am, only one of a different > sort: one of those who risks his skin to prove his platitudes." -- CHE > > > > > --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ "Freedom is the only law". "Freedom Unplugged" http://www.ilug-tvm.org You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "ilug-tvm" group. To post to this group, send email to ilug-tvm@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to ilug-tvm-unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For details visit the website: www.ilug-tvm.org or the google group page: http://groups.google.com/group/ilug-tvm?hl=en -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---