Paul Hoffman writes: > At 3:50 PM +0300 8/24/09, Tero Kivinen wrote: > >So would this text be added to both documents or what? > > It should go in both. That way, an implementer a year from now who > comes across one of the RFCs will both find out about the other and > be clear on the relationship. > > >If so where > >(between section 2 and 3 in esp-null-heuristics and after or replacing > >section 1.2 of traffic-visibility draft)? > > My preference for esp-null-heuristics is that this applicability > statement be section 1.1, and that what is now section 2 (the 2119 > language) become section 1.2.
Posted new version of the draft now to the repository. Changes are: - Added applicability statement - Processed comments from Yaron - Added comment about UDP-encapsulated ESP and IPsec flows to new section 7. - Fixed typos - Added text to security considerations section that attacker can bypass inspection by other encapsulation methods too. - Processed comments from David McGrew - Added text about IV not necessarely being random - Added text about minimal padding - Removed the "XXX TBA -- including possible chunk-specific checking" from SCTP section (if someone will provide me text about that I will add it). - Added some more comments to the pseudocode -- kivi...@iki.fi _______________________________________________ IPsec mailing list IPsec@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec