Nits only:

1. This draft should probably obsolete 4307.

2. Couldn’t hurt to make 4307 an *informative* reference.

3. s3.4: r/[IKEv2]/[RFC7296] 

4. So I was going to say that you should add [RFC3536] & [RFC4753] as normative 
references but I guess the 1st para in s3.1 takes care of all the algorithm 
references in the draft.  Personally, I think that’s fine as long as all the 
MUST/SHOULDs are either standards track or in the downref registry (e.g., 
RFC4753) - and I just clicked throughout them all and they are.  Here’s to 
saving trees and not including a ton of unnecessary references.

spt

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