On Thu, 9 Feb 2023, Tero Kivinen wrote:

which do not match. I suggest just removing the section 3 text, as
this is already explained in the section 2.2. Or perhaps moving the
text from section 2.2 to section 3, replacing that old section 3
paragraph with the text moved from section 2.2.

I did the latter.

In the section 3.1 it would be nice to use properly formatted
IP-addresses. Now it looks that you are negotiating some 24-bit
FC-addresses, as your ip-addresse only has 3-bytes in them:

        TSi = ((17,24233,198.51.12-198.51.12),
               (17,0,192.0.2.0-192.0.2.255),
               (0,0,198.51.0-198.51.255),
               TS_SECLABEL1, TS_SECLABEL2)

and
        TSi = ((0,0,198.51.0-198.51.255),
               TS_SECLABEL1)

Replace 198.5.12 with something like 198.5.0.12 and 192.51.0 with
192.51.0.0 and 192.51.255 with 192.51.0.255 or something... There is

It should be 198.51.100.0/24 which is TEST-NET-2. This error has been
there forever without getting spotted. Changed this to:


      An initiator could send:

      TSi = ((17,24233,198.51.100.12-198.51.100.12),
             (0,0,198.51.100.0-198.51.100.255),
             (0,0,192.0.2.0-192.0.2.255),
             TS_SECLABEL1, TS_SECLABEL2)

      TSr = ((17,53,203.0.113.1-203.0.113.1),
             (0,0,203.0.113.0-203.0.113.255),
             TS_SECLABEL1, TS_SECLABEL2)

       The responder could answer with the following  example:

      TSi = ((0,0,198.51.100.0-198.51.100.255),
             TS_SECLABEL1)

      TSr = (((0,0,203.0.113.0-203.0.113.255),
             TS_SECLABEL1)

eg also fixed the initiator site-to-site not to use proto udp.

I'll submit this in a day or two to give people a change to review this
again :)

Paul

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