Hi! I conducted an AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-labeled-ipsec-09. Thanks for the work on this document. I have a few editorial recommendations that can be handled concurrently to IETF Last Call.
** Section 2.2. s/it MUST not install/it MUST NOT install/ since "MUST no" is not a keyword ** Is repeating this (and related) normative guidance needed: -- Section 2.2: "The TS_SECLABEL Traffic Selector Type MUST NOT be the only TS_TYPE present in the TS payload." -- Section 3: "TS_SECLABEL MUST NOT be used without another TS_TYPE in a Traffic Selector Payload, as it does not specify a complete set of traffic selectors on its own." Regards, Roman _______________________________________________ IPsec mailing list IPsec@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec
