Re-, Thanks, Paul.
Also added a note to explain "15" in the example. The new version with all the changes shared so far is now online: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipsecme-add-ike/14/. Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : Paul Wouters <p...@nohats.ca> > Envoyé : mercredi 10 mai 2023 18:25 > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> > Cc : Paul Wouters <paul.wout...@aiven.io>; The IESG > <i...@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-ipsecme-add-...@ietf.org; ipsecme- > cha...@ietf.org; ipsec@ietf.org; kivi...@iki.fi > Objet : Re: [IPsec] Paul Wouters' Discuss on draft-ietf-ipsecme- > add-ike-11: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) > > On Wed, 10 May 2023, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: > > Thanks for the changes to address my concerns. > > >> The idea here is that the other "1" should also be described > here. > > > > [Med] That other "1" is about the address count. This is why we > are referring to an "address" not "addresses". Made this change > "s/Its IPv6 address (2001:db8:99:88:77:66:55:44)/Its single IPv6 > address (2001:db8:99:88:77:66:55:44)". > > Maybe: Its single (1) Pv6 address (2001:db8:99:88:77:66:55:44)" > to make it abundantly clear? > > Based on this email (and Valery's other email), I've cleared my > DISCUSS. > > Paul _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you. _______________________________________________ IPsec mailing list IPsec@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec
