Hi Vukasin,
 
Dear authors and ipsecme WG,
 
I like the draft very much. I have some small suggestions:
 
- "1. Notes of Change" section compares the changes to 
"draft-ietf-ipsecme-kem-auth-ikev2*" document, I believe that is a typo and you 
mean "draft-ietf-ipsecme-hybrid-kem-ikev2-frodo*".
 
         These are typos, thanks for catching.
 
- "4.3. Comparison to ML-KEM" subsection says "The performance of FrodoKEM is 
not as good as ML-KEM. As shown in Table 1, ...", where in Table 1 the private 
key, public key and ciphertext sizes are listed. The wording "performance of 
FrodoKEM" makes me believe the software/hardware performance of the FrodoKEM's 
algorithms is not as good as ML-KEM. I suggest changing the wording to 
something like "space efficiency", or "data overhead", or something third. 
Note: I am making this suggestion without even looking at the software/hardware 
performance of FrodoKEM and ML-KEM algorithms, and am just noticing the 
unclarity between the sentence and the table.
 
         Thank you, we will clarify this.
 
I followed yesterday's CFRG meeting, and a couple of messages in the chat 
mentioned FrodoKEM, and I had some thoughts/questions (as an occasional 
participant in ipsecme, cfrg and IETF) that someone on the list may be able to 
give their opinion/answer on (I am paraphrasing the questions from my memory 
from yesterday):
 
- There was a message saying cfrg FrodoKEM draft by FrodoKEM team, which is now 
in draft-ietf-ipsecme-hybrid-kem-ikev2-frodo-02 as a *normative* reference, was 
rejected by cfrg. I tried searching the cfrg mailing list but didn't find any 
messages (e.g. from the chairs) saying the cfrg will not pursue the 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-longa-cfrg-frodokem/
 
         My understanding of what the CFGRG chairs’ said at the session is that 
the CFRG has no plans to adopt the FrodoKEM draft right now, not that it was 
rejected.
 
- There were 1 or 2 messages saying that cfrg/IETF should aim to standardize 
(or give guidance in case of cfrg) algorithms that are of importance for 
international community, and not follow suggestions of national standardization 
bodies. I was puzzled because that made me think the ML-KEM (suggested by a 
nation A standardization body) was somehow the sole KEM important for 
international community, and that IETF (in the context of the chat discussion 
during the meeting, where only ipsecme was mentioned as a WG that has 
FrodoKEM-related draft) should not spend time on FrodoKEM (suggested by nation 
B standardization body)?? My point here is that I think ipsecme should still 
continue with the effort of publishing this draft (in the hope the reference 
issues get resolved in the meantime, and also assuming there's enough interest 
from the WG).
 
         I agree.
 
         Regards,
         Valery.
 
Cheers,
Vukasin Karadzic
 
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