Looks okay to me, with one change:
s/accept point/access point/
Russ
At 04:21 AM 4/28/2005, JINMEI Tatuya / =?ISO-2022-JP?B?GyRCP0BMQEMjOkgbKEI=?= wrote:
Hello,
In your IESG comments on draft-ietf-ipv6-rfc2462bis-07.txt, you said:
> I suggest adding another event to section 5.3. Consider an event > that indicates that the physical network connectivity may have > changed. Such events include a carrier down/carrier sequence on > an Ethernet NIC, a change of SSID on an 802.11 network, or waking > up from a "sleep" period.
Thanks for the suggestion, I think this is a useful (and harmless) addition. How about the following text?
======================================================================= 5.3 Creation of Link-Local Addresses
A node forms a link-local address whenever an interface becomes enabled. An interface may become enabled after any of the following events:
- The interface is initialized at system startup time.
- The interface is reinitialized after a temporary interface failure or after being temporarily disabled by system management.
- The interface attaches to a link for the first time. This includes the case where the attached link is dynamically changed due to a change of the accept point of wireless networks.
- The interface becomes enabled by system management after having been administratively disabled. ======================================================================= (the third bullet is modified)
Thanks,
JINMEI, Tatuya Communication Platform Lab. Corporate R&D Center, Toshiba Corp. [EMAIL PROTECTED]
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