On 25 Jul 2013, at 10:39, Ralph Droms <rdroms.i...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > On Jul 24, 2013, at 6:26 PM 7/24/13, JINMEI Tatuya / 神明達哉 > <jinmei.tat...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> At Wed, 24 Jul 2013 09:19:15 +0200, >> Ralph Droms <rdroms.i...@gmail.com> wrote: >> >>>> I have a couple of comments on the draft: >>>> >>>> - I think the draft explains the motivation of introducing the new >> >> (I meant "the draft should explain...") >> >>>> scope. It will also help understand the vague term of the >>>> "Network-Specific" scope, or "defined automatically from the network >>>> topology". I've checked the ML archive and understood it's related >>>> to http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast-04 >>>> But I suspect it's quite difficult to figure it out just from the >>>> generic description of the draft. >>> >>> The lack of direct connection between draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast >>> and this document is intentional. The purpose of the definition of >>> Network-Specific scope is to allow the use of that scope by >>> draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast, as well as other use cases. >> >> I see you want to keep the scope document not too specific. But in >> its current form, the concept of "network specific" is too vague and >> I'm afraid it's reader-unfriendly (in fact I couldn't understand the >> idea just from this draft and ended up digging into the ML archive). >> I don't think it too restrictive if we show one specific example of >> the intended usage with a note that reads "but the use of this scope >> is not limited to this case; in terms of the scope definition it can >> be used for any other usage as long as it meets other architectural >> constraints". >> >> But I wouldn't strongly argue for that. It's just a suggestion. > > Sounds like a good suggestion to me. I have no objection to adding such > text, if there is WG consensus for the change... I think the suggested change would enhance the text. Tim > > - Ralph > >> >> -- >> JINMEI, Tatuya > > -------------------------------------------------------------------- > IETF IPv6 working group mailing list > ipv6@ietf.org > Administrative Requests: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 > -------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------- IETF IPv6 working group mailing list ipv6@ietf.org Administrative Requests: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 --------------------------------------------------------------------
