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ASF GitHub Bot commented on GEODE-8850:
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jdeppe-pivotal commented on a change in pull request #5924:
URL: https://github.com/apache/geode/pull/5924#discussion_r561011462



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File path: geode-docs/reference/topics/gemfire_properties.html.md.erb
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@@ -568,7 +568,7 @@ Any security-related (properties that begin with <code 
class="ph codeph">securit
 </tr>
 <tr>
 <td>security-client-auth-init</td>
-<td>Used for authentication. Static creation method returning an <code 
class="ph codeph">AuthInitialize</code> object, which obtains credentials for 
peers in a cluster. The obtained credentials should be acceptable to the <code 
class="ph codeph">Authenticator</code> specified through the 
security-peer-authenticator property on the peers.</td>
+<td>Used for authentication. Location of the implementation with the static 
creation method that returns an <code class="ph codeph">AuthInitialize</code> 
object. The method obtains credentials for clients to a cluster. The obtained 
credentials should be acceptable to the <code class="ph 
codeph">SecurityManager</code> specified through the security-manager property 
on the peers.</td>

Review comment:
       How about: `A reference to a static creation method that...` and then... 
`The method returns credentials for clients to authenticate and connect to a 
cluster.`




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> Revise security-client-auth-init property defn
> ----------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: GEODE-8850
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/GEODE-8850
>             Project: Geode
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: docs
>            Reporter: Karen Smoler Miller
>            Assignee: Karen Smoler Miller
>            Priority: Major
>              Labels: pull-request-available
>
> It appears that the definition of the security-client-auth-init property is 
> simply a copy of the security-peer-auth-init property definition. Revise it.



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