AlexanderAshitkin commented on code in PR #40:
URL: 
https://github.com/apache/maven-build-cache-extension/pull/40#discussion_r1125518288


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src/site/markdown/getting-started.md:
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 ## Getting Started
 
-To on-board incremental Maven you need to complete several steps:
+To onboard incremental Maven you need to complete several steps:

Review Comment:
   fixed



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src/site/markdown/index.md:
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 Build cache is an extension targeted to simplify and make more efficient work 
with large builds in Maven.
 
-That is achieved by a combination of features:
+A combination of features achieves that:
 
-* Incremental builds over the changed project graph part only
-* Subtree support in multimodule projects (caches discovered from the larger 
project)
+* Incremental builds works on the modified part of the project graph part only
+* Subtree support for multimodule projects to work on the part of the codebase 
in isolation
 * Version normalization to support project version agnostic caches
 * Project state restoration (partial) to avoid expensive tasks (code 
generation and similar)
 
-Large projects usually pose scalability challenges and work with such projects 
require build tool which scales. Cache
-extension addresses that with incremental build execution and ability to 
efficiently work on sub-parts of a larger
+Large projects usually pose scalability challenges, and working with such 
projects requires a build tool that scales.
+The cache
+extension addresses that with incremental build execution and the ability to 
efficiently work on sub-parts of a larger
 project without building and installing dependencies from the larger project. 
Though, features implemented in Maven
-should give noticeable benefits in medium and small sized projects as well.
+should also give noticeable benefits in medium and small-sized projects.
 
 ### Cache concepts
 
-The idea of the build cache is to calculate key from module inputs, store 
outputs in cache and restore them later
-transparently to the standard Maven core. In order to calculate the key cache 
engine analyzes source code, build flow,
-plugins and their parameters. This allows to deterministically associate each 
project state with unique key and restore
-up-to-date (not changed) projects from cache and rebuild out-of-date(changed) 
ones. Restoring artifacts associated with
-a particular project state improves build times by avoiding re-building 
unnecessary modules. Cache does not make any
-interventions to actual build execution process and fully delegates build work 
to Maven core. This ensures that
-artifacts produced in presence of cache are equivalent to result produced by a 
standard Maven build.   
-To achieve accurate key calculation incremental Maven combines automatic 
introspection
-of [project object model](https://maven.apache.org/pom.html#What_is_the_POM) 
and allows fine-grained tuning by means of
-configuration file and xml attributes. Source code content fingerprinting is 
digests based which is more reliable over
-widely used file timestamps in tools like Make or Apache Ant. Deterministic 
build state allows reliably cache outputs
-even of the build in progress and share them between teams using remote cache. 
Deterministic inputs calculation allows
-distributed and parallel builds running in heterogeneous environments (like 
cloud of build agents)
-could efficiently reuse cached build artifacts. Therefore, incremental Maven 
is particularly well-suited for large Maven
-projects that have significant number of small modules. Remote cache in 
conjunction with relocatable inputs
-identification effectively enables "change once - build once" approach across 
all environments.
+The idea of the build cache is to calculate a key from module inputs, store 
outputs in the cache, and restore them later
+transparently to the standard Maven core. The cache deterministically 
associates each project state with a unique key
+and restores it in subsequent builds. It analyzes source code, project model,
+plugins, and their parameters. Projects with the same key are up-to-date (not 
changed) and could be safely restored from
+the cache. Projects producing different keys are out-of-date (changed), and 
the cache fully rebuilds them. In the latter
+case, the cache does not make any
+interventions to the build execution logic and delegates build work to the 
standard maven Maven core. This approach
+ensures that
+artifacts produced in the presence of a cache are equivalent to the result 
produced by a standard Maven build.   
+To achieve an accurate key calculation, incremental Maven combines automatic 
introspection

Review Comment:
   fixed



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