Perfect. I just thing that the 'negative' part of the message should be shorter. For example :
This second release of Ivy in the Apache incubator is an alpha version, the API and the features might change until final 2.0.0 version. Still we encourage the use of this version for early testing. What do you think? Gilles > -----Original Message----- > From: Xavier Hanin [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Sent: jeudi 19 juillet 2007 16:41 > To: [email protected] > Subject: preparing Ivy 2.0.0 alpha 2 announcement > > Hi, > > If nobody sends a -1 vote for the 2.0 alpha 2 release of Ivy on the > [EMAIL PROTECTED] list until tonight, we will be able to officially release > it. > > Thus I would like to gather feedback about the announcement I plan to send > tomorrow: > --------------------------8<-------------------------------------------- > July 20 2007 - The Ivy incubator project is please to announce its > 2.0.0 alpha 2 release, a new step on the road toward 2.0 final. > > Ivy is a tool for managing (recording, tracking, resolving and > reporting) project dependencies, characterized by flexibility, > configurability, and tight integration with Apache Ant. > > This second release of Ivy in the Apache incubator is still an > alpha version, as such we do not guarantee any stability, API and features > are still likely to change until final 2.0.0 version. Still we encourage > the use of this version for early testing. > > This version focus was to clean the code to get better readability > and improve maven 2 compatibility along with several other > bug fixes and improvement. > > Download the 2.0.0 alpha 2 release files at: > http://incubator.apache.org/ivy/download.html > > More information can be found on the Ivy website - > http://incubator.apache.org/ivy/ > > Regards, > Xavier Hanin (2.0.0-alpha-2 release mgr) > --------------------------8<-------------------------------------------- > > What do you think? > > Xavier > -- > Xavier Hanin - Independent Java Consultant > http://xhab.blogspot.com/ > http://incubator.apache.org/ivy/ > http://www.xoocode.org/
