Chris:

> Changed accordingly, please review

     libawn provides the  share  library  for  the  avant-window-
     navigatior library functions.

I would say something like this:

     libawn is a shared library that provides interfaces for
     developing applets and desktop items to be used with
     avant-window-manager.

I would use this link for the API:

http://wiki.awn-project.org/AWN_API

> Brian Cameron ??:
>> Chris:
>>
>> DESCRIPTION
>>       libawn is a dock-like navigation bar for the  linux  desktop
>>       that positions itself at the bottom of the screen. It can be
>>       used to keep track of open windows and behaves like a normal
>>       window list.
>>
>> The description section explains what the avant-window-navigator
>> binary does and doesn't seem to provide any information about the
>> library, or explain why a user might want to use it.
>>
>> Would be better if the manpage explained the purpose of the
>> library.  Also, would be helpful if the docs pointed towards some
>> API documentation (either on-disk or a URL) so that people could
>> learn more if they want.
>>
>> Also make sure you modify all the awn-related manpages so that
>> their SEE ALSO sections point to the other awn-related manpages.
>> For example awn-manager doesn't seem to point to awn-applet-activation
>> or awn-schema-to-gconf.  All the awn manpages need their SEE ALSO
>> sections updated, and they should point to the libawn page also.
>>
>> Brian
>>
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