Hi Laca,

Thanks for the comments, I have updated the SUNWdrivel.spec.

Here is the latest version:
http://fogbroom.prc/bjroot/users/yz203490/FOSS/drivel_spec/

Best Regards,
David



On 02/15/09 16:16, Laszlo (Laca) Peter wrote:
> Hi David,
>
> Looks good.  Just one comment, you should probably set CFLAGS and
> CXXFLAGS in %build as follows to enable optimisation:
>
> %build
> export CC=/usr/sfw/bin/gcc
> export CXX=/usr/sfw/bin/g++
> export CFLAGS="%gcc_optflags"
> export CXXFLAGS="%gcc_cxx_optflags"
>
> Laca
>
> On Sat, 2009-02-14 at 23:46 +0800, David Zhang wrote:
>   
>> Hi Brian,
>>
>> I have updated the materials, thanks for your comments. Would you please 
>> review them again?
>> http://fogbroom.prc/bjroot/users/yz203490/FOSS/drivel_spec/
>>
>>
>>
>> On 02/14/09 06:22, Brian Cameron wrote:
>>     
>>> David:
>>>
>>> Some comments:
>>>
>>> In the two spec files you provide this description:
>>>
>>> In SUNWdrivel.spec:
>>> Summary:            Drivel - A GNOME client for offline blog
>>>
>>> In drivel.spec:
>>> Summary:        Drivel is a GNOME client for offline blog
>>>
>>> What does "offline blog" mean?  Perhaps "Drivel - Blog Editor"
>>> would be more concise and clear to use in both spec files as
>>> the Summary.
>>>
>>> Note in the manpage you say "online blogs", but here you say "offline".
>>> That seems a bit confusing.
>>>
>>> In the manpage:
>>>
>>>   NAME
>>>      drivel - GNOME client for working with online blogs
>>>
>>> I would say "editing" instead of "working with".  Would
>>> it be better to remove the word "online" and just say
>>> "GNOME client for editing blogs"?
>>>
>>> Note the DESCRIPTION section has similar text which should also be
>>> updated to be similar.
>>>
>>>   SYNOPSIS
>>>        drivel [options ... ] [url]
>>>
>>> We normally list the options in the SYNOPSIS so instead of
>>> "[options ... ]" you should say "[-v]".
>>>
>>> Also note that "[url]" is an OPERAND, so the manpage should have
>>> an OPERAND section to explain this.  The manpage is missing this.
>>> Is the URL operand optional?  It should only be surrounded by "["
>>> and "]" characters if the operand is optional, by the way.
>>>
>>>   DESCRIPTION
>>>
>>> In this section there is the following list
>>>
>>>      - Support for LiveJournal, Blogger,  MovableType,  Advogato,
>>>      and Atom journals
>>>
>>>      - The ability to post, edit, delete, and view recent entries
>>>
>>>      [...]
>>>
>>> Looking at the drivel.1 file you are not using <listitem> tags
>>> to generate this list.  This makes the formatting show up wrong.
>>> You should be using <listitem> here.  Note the "EXTENDED
>>> DESCRIPTION" section of the create-branching-keyboard.1 manpage in
>>> spec-files/manpages/man1 directory to see an example of how to format
>>> a list correctly.
>>>
>>>    SEE ALSO
>>>
>>> You should include attributes(5) in the SEE-ALSO list.  Also if
>>> drivel supports gnome-std-options(5), you should reference that
>>> manpage here and in the SYNOPSIS.  Refer to any GNOME GUI manpage
>>> (e.g. "gnome-help") for an example of how the "SEE ALSO" section
>>> should be formatted.
>>>
>>> Brian
>>>
>>>
>>>       
>>>> Hi JDS team,
>>>>
>>>> Would you please help me to review the following packaging code for
>>>> poring drivel into JDS gate?
>>>>
>>>> You can find the spec and related files from the attachment of this
>>>> email or accessing the following weblink:
>>>> http://fogbroom.prc/bjroot/users/yz203490/FOSS/drivel_spec/
>>>>
>>>> The human-readable manpage output is in drivel.1_man.txt, drivel.1 is
>>>> the original xml file.
>>>>
>>>> It is highly appreciate if you could give me any comments and 
>>>> suggestions :)
>>>> Have a nice day!
>>>>
>>>> Regards,
>>>> David
>>>>
>>>> On 02/10/09 18:31, Dermot McCluskey wrote:
>>>>         
>>>>> Have you sent out your code (spec-files, etc) for code-review
>>>>> to jds-review at opensolaris.org?  If not, please do so ASAP.
>>>>>
>>>>> What "SUNWspec documentation" are you referring to?
>>>>>
>>>>> I will ask the REs doing the build if they are prepared to
>>>>> do a partial respin for this pkg, but I am not promising
>>>>> anything - in fact, I think it's far too late to be adding
>>>>> brand new pkgs to the stable build.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> - Dermot
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> On 02/10/09 08:56, David Zhang wrote:
>>>>>           
>>>>>> On 02/10/09 14:28, Leo Binchy wrote:
>>>>>>             
>>>>>>> Grant Zhang wrote:
>>>>>>>               
>>>>>>>> Hi Dermot,
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Yes, we are still planning to integrate into the JDS gate.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Leo approved the drivel  checklist for B112 integration.  
>>>>>>>>                 
>>>>>>> Correction Dee approved it
>>>>>>>               
>>>>>>>> Leo, I would like to check whether it is possible for us to 
>>>>>>>> integrate to B109, instead of B112. 
>>>>>>>>                 
>>>>>>> If all the QA is done - which I am assuming it is as it got 
>>>>>>> approval there is no reason as to why this cannot go into build 
>>>>>>> 109. Howvere it seems you have now missed build 109 as  RE kicked 
>>>>>>> this build off yesterday.
>>>>>>>               
>>>>>> Hi Leo and Dermot,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> All the QA is done, I am preparing the SUNWspec documentation which 
>>>>>> I plan to send it out today. Could we also catch up with JDS_b109 
>>>>>> by any chance?
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>             
>>>>>>>> What does it entail? From code changes point of view David is 
>>>>>>>> ready for integration. We can provide additional information if 
>>>>>>>> needed.
>>>>>>>>                 
>>>>>> Our original target was b111 which is 1 month later, however the 
>>>>>> b110 and b111 became restricted. If we get it into b112, our 
>>>>>> original target build is /delayed/ 1 build.
>>>>>> If we could get it into b109, that would be much better. I am 
>>>>>> getting familiar with SUNWspec and CBE(diffs) - I am pretty new to 
>>>>>> JDS gate. Those are the latest 2 steps, correct?
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Regards,
>>>>>> David
>>>>>>             
>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Grant
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Dermot McCluskey wrote:
>>>>>>>>                 
>>>>>>>>> Grant/David,
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Are you still planning to integrate drivel via the
>>>>>>>>> JDS gate?  b109 started today and I don't any sign of
>>>>>>>>> a spec-file for drivel in the JDS code repository.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> - Dermot
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> On 02/09/09 13:57, Grant Zhang wrote:
>>>>>>>>>                   
>>>>>>>>>> Hi Dermot,
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Drivel was approved last week for B112 integration, since 
>>>>>>>>>> B110/B111 are limited content builds. David Zhang is the RE for 
>>>>>>>>>> Drivel.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> We are actually trying to get drivel into B109 if possible.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Grant
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Dermot McCluskey wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>                     
>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Grant,
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> What is the status of drivel?  According to our schedule
>>>>>>>>>>> you were planning to integrate to JDS and then integrate
>>>>>>>>>>> to Solaris Nevada by build 111?
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> Is that still the case?  If not, do you have a new schedule?
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>>>>>> - Dermot
>>>>>>>>>>>                       
>>>>
>>>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> %commonents;
>>>>
>>>> %booktitles;
>>>>
>>>> ]>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> &cmd;1
>>>> 12 Feb 2009
>>>> &man1;
>>>> &release;
>>>> generic
>>>> &suncopy;
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> &cmd;GNOME client for
>>>> working with online blogs
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> &cmd;
>>>> GNOME client for working with online blogs
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> &cmd;
>>>> options ... url
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> &cmd; is a GNOME client for working with online blogs.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> - Support for LiveJournal, Blogger, MovableType, Advogato, and Atom 
>>>> journals
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> - The ability to post, edit, delete, and view recent entries
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> - Integrated spellchecking and HTML syntax highlighting
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> - Offline composition and editing
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> - Automatic recovery in the event of a crash
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> - Journal system extensions, including LiveJournal and MovableType
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> The following options are supported:
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> v or verbose
>>>> Enables debug output
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> example% &cmd;
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> The following exit values are returned:
>>>>
>>>> 0Application
>>>> exited successfully
>>>>
>>>> 1Application
>>>> exited with failure
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> The following files are used by this application:
>>>>
>>>> /usr/bin/&cmd; Executable for Drivel application
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> See attributes5
>>>> for descriptions of the following attributes:
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> ATTRIBUTE TYPEATTRIBUTE VALUE
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> AvailabilitySUNWdrivel
>>>>
>>>> Interface stabilityVolatile
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> For more information about drivel, please refer to
>>>> http://dropline.net/past-projects/drivel-blog-editor
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Drivel was written by Todd Kulesza <todd at dropline.net>. This manual 
>>>> page was written by David Zhang <david.zhang at sun.com>.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>         
>
>   

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