Alan:

Thanks for your comments.  Really appreciated.

> gdm(1m):
> 
>>      The Automatic Login feature which will cause GDM  to  bypass
>>      the  login greeter GUI entirely and immediately start a ses-
>>      sion for the user specified in the GDM  configuration. 
> 
> The "which" seems to be out of place there.

Good catch.  I removed the word "which" from the above sentence.

>>   XDMCP
>>      By default, XDMCP is disabled in GDM.  
> 
> It would probably be good at the start of the XDMCP section to explain
> what XDMCP is for those not familiar with the acronym - just a sentence
> or two such as:
> 
>       XDMCP displays the login screen and resulting session
>       on a remote machine over the network interface.  By
>       default, XDMCP is disabled in GDM....

I added the above text to the beginning of the XDMCP section, though
I also spell out the acronym also as follows:

      XDMCP (X Display  Manager  Control  Protocol)  displays  the
      login  screen and resulting session on a remote machine over
      the network interface.  By default,  XDMCP  is  disabled  in

> The gdm man page should probably have an added section about SMF, giving
> it's service name and references to svcadm, like most of the other services
> controlled by SMF on Solaris - see the "SMF PROPERTIES" section in dtlogin(1)
> or the SMF references in hald(1m) for instance.
> 
> gdm-stop(1m):
> 
>>      gdm-stop stops the GDM daemon process by sending a TERM sig-
>>      nal  to  the GDM daemon. This command immediately terminates
>>      all sessions and logs out users  currently  logged  in  with
>>      GDM.
> 
> But won't smf immediately restart it?   Should this just tell you to do
> svcadm disable gdm instead? (unless you manually started gdm and didn't
> svcadm enable it)

I added the following paragraph to the end of the DESCRIPTION.

      On Solaris, the GDM service is managed by the smf(5) service
      management    facility    under   the   service   identifier
      svc:/application/graphical-login/gdm.   On  Solaris,  it  is
      recommended that you use the svcadm(1m) utility to start and
      stop the GDM service instead of using gdm-stop(1m).

I also made a similar change to the gdm(1m) manpage where it makes
mention of gdm-stop:

      If you wish to stop the GDM service, you can either  send  a
      TERM  signal to the main GDM daemon, or run the gdm-stop(1m)
      command.  On Solaris, the GDM  service  is  managed  by  the
      smf(5)  service  management facility under the service iden-
      tifier svc:/application/graphical-login/gdm.  On Solaris, it
      is  recommended that you use the svcadm(1m) utility to start
      and stop the GDM service instead of using gdm-stop(1m).

Previously the manpage only had the first sentence of the above
paragraph.

> gdmdynamic(1m):
> 
>     -l pattern      List  displays  that  are  started  via  the
>                      gdmdynamic command.
>                       Without a pattern,  all  attached  displays
>                      are  lsited.
> 
> Typo: s/lsited/listed/

Fixed, thanks.

> BTW, at this years X.Org Developers Conference we got a demo of a
> dynamic multiseat system using USB hotpluggable devices that provide
> a DisplayLink video output port and USB keyboard/mouse/audio [1] and they
> talked about how gdmdynamic made it all possible [2].   We of course pointed
> out that Sun contributed to that for Sun Rays 8-)
> 
> [1] http://plugable.com/
> [2] http://libdlo.freedesktop.org/wiki/MultiSeatTerminal

Cool.

Brian


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