Couple more comments:
1. Think about expanding the abstract. Remember this is text that is
expected to be read in isolation from the rest of the document.
2. You missed a couple of uses of "REQUIRED members" in the last edit
pass.
3. This statement from section 4
"Use of escaped characters in the input JWK representation SHOULD be
avoided.
Does not agree with the statement from section 3.3
"Characters in member names and member values MUST be represented
without being escaped."
While I assume that the statement in section 4 is to apply to values, it
does not say so.
4. Section 7 needs to be moved. It must come before the IANA
considerations section. Given the content you might consider putting the
text into the introduction.
Jim
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