Hi! Thanks for the review.
> -----Original Message----- > From: iesg <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Éric Vyncke via Datatracker > Sent: Wednesday, December 14, 2022 2:08 AM > To: The IESG <[email protected]> > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Éric Vyncke's Yes on charter-ietf-jose-02-01: (with COMMENT) > > Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for > charter-ietf-jose-02-01: Yes > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email > addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory > paragraph, however.) > > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-ietf-jose/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for the review. > It seems that the use of MD URL makes the text difficult to read (probably a > datatracker rendering issue). Lars suggested using reference style links. This has been applied to 02-02. > The 4th paragraph starting with "A multi-decade research activity..." is a > little > long (suggest to skip the first sentence). Having two sentences starting with > "Some" makes this paragraph rather vague. Finally, once ZKP abbreviation is > introduced, then let's use it. > > s/This group is chartered to work on the following deliverables/This group is > chartered to work on the following goals/ as later in the charter "One or more > of these goals may be combined into a single document" (which would make > sense). Fixed for these have been in 02-02. > About the CBOR encoding, should CDDL be mentioned ? Should CBOR WG be > listed in the interested parties ? A reference to coordination with the CBOR WG has been added. Thanks, Roman _______________________________________________ jose mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/jose
