On Monday 25 November 2013 07:47:14 Mirko Boehm wrote:
> On 24 Nov 2013, at 11:17, Marta Rybczynska <rybczyn...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > Just a doubt about two lines:
> > Licensing policy must be respected.
> > branding guidelines are respected.
>
> +1.

Unified to "are" since the tendency is to use active forms AFAICT.

> Is the "Increase your market visibility” still in, under “Benefits”? If so,
> I suggest that to be changed to simply "Increase your visibility”. We
> aren’t catering to a market only, but to users in general. Having “market”
> in there unnecessarily limits what the benefit is, and also just mans
> repeating what the business drones say :-)

Makes sense, I dropped the market word.

Regards.
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