On 15 March 2016 21:15:38 GMT+00:00, Alexander Neundorf <neund...@kde.org> wrote: >On Tuesday, March 15, 2016 08:26:15 Stephen Kelly wrote: >> Lydia Pintscher wrote: >> > Hi everyone, >> > >> > "A world in which everyone enjoys freedom and privacy and has >control >> > over their digital life." >> > >> > Unless there are major objections within the next week I would like >to >> > conclude the process and from now on use this as our vision >statement. >> >> Not a major objection, but some feedback: It's very wordy at the end >> especially with all the 'and's in it. > >I agree, the two "and"'s sound a bit bumpy/"holprig". > >I very much like that freedom is in there, this fit's my wish to >express some >kind of independence. >How about skipping the "privacy" ? This is with no or only very little >interpretation included in "have control".
This may read a bit better, although it does slightly alter the emphasis: "A world in which everyone has control over their digital life and enjoys freedom and privacy." -- David Jarvie KAlarm author, KDE developer http://www.astrojar.org.UK/KAlarm _______________________________________________ kde-community mailing list kde-community@kde.org https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-community