On Tuesday, September 04, 2012 02:27:22 AM Andr? Marcelo Alvarenga wrote: > https://bugs.kde.org/show_bug.cgi?id=306226 > > Bug ID: 306226 > Severity: normal > Version: unspecified > Priority: NOR > Assignee: kde-doc-english at kde.org > Summary: Kalzium - update Handbook > Classification: Unclassified > OS: Linux > Reporter: andrealvarenga at gmx.net > Hardware: Debian stable > Status: UNCONFIRMED > Component: Corrections > Product: docs > > 1) > #: index.docbook:147 > msgid "Here are some screenshots of &kalzium; in action:" > > I think this string should be after the next string. (with changes) > > --------Original--------- > Overview of Kalzium usage > > Here are some screenshots of Kalzium in action: > > Kalzium is very easy to use. It is specially designed for students of all > ages to use as a small and quick database. > > (screenshot) > > --------Changed--------- > Overview of Kalzium usage > > Kalzium is very easy to use. It is specially designed for students of all > ages to use as a small and quick database. > > Here is a screenshot of Kalzium in action: > > (screenshot) > > > Reason: > > - Just one screenshot in 3.1 caption (See PDF Handbook for better viewing) > > 2) > > The Kalzium Sidebar reference needs to be reviewed: > > Reasons: > > - In Kalzium Sidebar there are three tabs: Overview, View and Calculate. In > Kalzium Handbook there are four tabs: Overview, State of Matter, View and > Calculate. > - The State of Matter tab is now inside the View tab. > - The View tab has two items now: Scheme and Gradient. > > Affected messages: 196 (index.docbook:836) to 213 (index.docbook:909) - (in > trunk/docmessages) > > Reproducible: Always > > -- > You are receiving this mail because: > You are the assignee for the bug. > _______________________________________________ > kde-doc-english mailing list > kde-doc-english at kde.org > https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-doc-english
- I agree with your change, it makes more sense grammar wise.