Git commit e893f9c26e9bd01dcd88ef600791643822737a5c by Frederik Schwarzer.
Committed on 04/01/2016 at 01:38.
Pushed by schwarzer into branch 'master'.

Update and proofread docs a bit.

M  +11   -12   doc/index.docbook

http://commits.kde.org/kmahjongg/e893f9c26e9bd01dcd88ef600791643822737a5c

diff --git a/doc/index.docbook b/doc/index.docbook
index df63ef1..d018f26 100644
--- a/doc/index.docbook
+++ b/doc/index.docbook
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <!--IMPORTANT: please note that 'Do not change this!' notice does not apply to 
translators -->
 <!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//KDE//DTD DocBook XML V4.5-Based Variant V1.1//EN" 
"dtd/kdedbx45.dtd" [
   <!ENTITY kappname "&kmahjongg;"> 
-  <!ENTITY kappversion "0.8"><!--Applicaion version. Use this variable 
everywhere it's needed.-->
+  <!ENTITY kappversion "0.9"><!--Application version. Use this variable 
everywhere it's needed.-->
   <!ENTITY package "kdegames">  <!-- do not change this! -->
   <!ENTITY % English "INCLUDE" > <!-- change language only here -->
   <!ENTITY % addindex "IGNORE"> <!-- do not change this! -->
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 
 <legalnotice>&FDLNotice;</legalnotice>
  
-<date>2013-05-06</date><!-- Date of (re)writing, or update.-->
+<date>2016-01-04</date><!-- Date of (re)writing, or update.-->
 <releaseinfo>&kappversion; (&kde; 4.11)</releaseinfo><!-- Application version 
number. Use the variable definitions within header to change this value.-->
  
 <!--Short description of this document. Do not change unless necessary!-->
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
        <note><title>Gametype:</title><para>Board, Arcade</para></note><!-- 
Game genre. Use as many as necessary. Available game types are: Arcade, Board, 
Card, Dice, Toys, Logic, Strategy.-->
        <note><title>Number of possible 
players:</title><para>One</para></note><!--Number of possible players. It can 
be: One, Two,..., Multiplayer-->
        <para>
-               &kmahjongg; is a fun board game created after the famous 
oriental game of Mahjong (from Chinese <foreignphrase 
lang="zh">麻將</foreignphrase>). Unlike the original however, &kmahjongg; is a 
tile matching game for one or two players, a variation usually known as Mahjong 
Solitaire.
+               &kmahjongg; is a fun board game created after the famous 
oriental game of Mahjong (from Chinese <foreignphrase 
lang="zh">麻將</foreignphrase>). Unlike the original however, &kmahjongg; is a 
tile matching game for one player, a variation usually known as Mahjong 
Solitaire.
        </para>
        <para>
                In &kmahjongg; the tiles are scrambled and stacked on top of 
each other to resemble a certain shape. The player is then expected to remove 
all the tiles off the game board by locating each tile's matching pair.
@@ -71,8 +71,7 @@
        <note><title>Objective:</title><para>Remove all tiles from the game 
board by locating each tile's matching pair as fast as 
possible.</para></note><!--Describe the objective of the game.-->
 <!--How to play description. Don't be to specific on rules as they have a 
separate section in this document-->
        <para>
-               &kappname; will load a default layout automatically once
-               you start the game and you can start playing right away.        
        
+               &kappname; will load a default layout automatically once you 
start the game and you can start playing right away.
        </para>
        <note><title>Note:</title><para>The game timer will start immediately 
if the game is started.</para></note>
        <para>
@@ -81,11 +80,10 @@
        <note><title>Note:</title>
                <para>Bear in mind that you can only select the tiles which are 
<quote>Open</quote>. 
                        Tiles are considered <quote>Blocked</quote> when they
-                       are positioned behind other tiles, and when both the
+                       are positioned behind other tiles, or when both the
                        right and left sides of the tile are filled by others.
                        If at least one of the lateral sides is empty then the
-                       tile is considered 'Open', and can be
-                       removed.
+                       tile is considered 'Open', and can be removed.
        </para></note>
        <para>
                Once you have selected the right pair of tiles they will vanish 
off the game board, thus revealing the tiles previously located underneath, and 
opening the tiles adjacent to them.
@@ -121,7 +119,7 @@
                <varlistentry>
                        <term>Statusbar</term>
                        <listitem><para>
-                               The Status bar is located at the bottom of the 
screen, and contains four panes. The first pane lists the removed/total tiles 
and the number of matching tiles that have free sides. The second pane gives 
the sequence number of the game you are playing. The third pane lets the player 
know when the game is ready, and the last pane displays the game timer, which 
keeps track of the elapsed time from the start of the game until the game is 
finished.
+                               The status bar is located at the bottom of the 
screen, and contains four panes. The first pane displays the game timer, which 
keeps track of the elapsed time from the start of the game until the game is 
finished. The second pane lists the removed/total tiles and the number of 
matching tiles that have free sides. The third pane gives the sequence number 
of the game you are playing and the last pane lets the player know when the 
game is ready.
                        </para></listitem>
                </varlistentry>
        </variablelist>
@@ -188,15 +186,16 @@
                        </informaltable>
                </para>
                <itemizedlist>
+                       <listitem><para>The number of tiles on a KMahjongg 
board layout can differ from the number of tiles in the standard Mahjong tile 
set. That means that the number of occurences of tiles of the same type can 
also differ from the number stated in the table above.</para></listitem>
                        <listitem><para>Only the <quote>open</quote> tiles can 
be selected.</para></listitem>
                        <listitem><para><quote>Open</quote> tile is the tile 
which has one of the tile's lateral sides open, meaning that no other tiles are 
located immediately next to it.</para></listitem>
                        <listitem><para>Only when matching, open tiles can be 
removed from the game board.</para></listitem>
                        <listitem><para>Matching tiles are those where the face 
pictograms match.</para></listitem>
-               </itemizedlist>                 
+               </itemizedlist>
                <note><title>Note:</title><para>There are exceptions to this 
rule! In the traditional game of Mahjong each tile has a matching one except 
for the <quote>Flowers</quote> and <quote>Seasons</quote> tiles. </para></note>
                <itemizedlist>
-                       <listitem><para>The <quote>Flowers</quote> tiles have 
no doubles in the set and can be matched directly to 
each-other.</para></listitem>
-                       <listitem><para>The <quote>Seasons</quote> tiles have 
no doubles in the set and can be matched directly to each-other.  
</para></listitem>
+                       <listitem><para>The <quote>Flowers</quote> tiles have 
no doubles in the set and can be matched directly to each 
other.</para></listitem>
+                       <listitem><para>The <quote>Seasons</quote> tiles have 
no doubles in the set and can be matched directly to each 
other.</para></listitem>
                        <listitem><para>Not every &kmahjongg; game can be 
finished. Sometimes the tiles are mixed in such a way that it may not be 
possible to find all the matches. This problem can be avoided. Please refer to 
<link linkend="general-options">this section</link> of the configuration 
dialog.</para></listitem>
                        <listitem><para>To be eligible for a place amongst the 
high scores the player has to complete a game instance within the shortest 
period of time possible.</para></listitem>
                </itemizedlist>
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