> On April 17, 2016, 8:25 nachm., Luigi Toscano wrote:
> > doc/khelpcenter/index.docbook, line 54
> > <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/127675/diff/1/?file=456213#file456213line54>
> >
> >     insted of "as well as the native &plasma-workspaces; and applications 
> > documentation", what about something more generic, like "as well as the 
> > documentation of project from the &kde; community" ?

projects is too generic for me, we have no user documentation for many projects 
on projects.kde.org resp. quickgit.kde.org e.g. websites

we have:
user documentation for one workspace, the desktop
user documentation for applications


> On April 17, 2016, 8:25 nachm., Luigi Toscano wrote:
> > doc/khelpcenter/index.docbook, line 59
> > <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/127675/diff/1/?file=456213#file456213line59>
> >
> >     I would remove "base", and maybe "All applications (including 
> > &plasma-workspaces;) from the &kde; community"...
> >     The exact wording depends whether the change above is applied or not.

"All applications (including &plasma-workspaces;) from the &kde; community" is 
ok for me


> On April 17, 2016, 8:25 nachm., Luigi Toscano wrote:
> > doc/khelpcenter/index.docbook, line 262
> > <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/127675/diff/1/?file=456213#file456213line262>
> >
> >     It existed already, but... "the core interface to the desktop"?

That's from kde4, so let's just skip it


- Burkhard


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On April 17, 2016, 8:12 nachm., Burkhard Lück wrote:
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> (Updated April 17, 2016, 8:12 nachm.)
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> Review request for Documentation, Luigi Toscano and Pino Toscano.
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> Repository: khelpcenter
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> Description
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> proofread, update + add search feature
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> Diffs
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>   doc/khelpcenter/index.docbook b48f6c9 
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> Diff: https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/127675/diff/
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> 
> Testing
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> passes checkXML5
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> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Burkhard Lück
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