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   <title>Introduction</title>
 
   <para>This handbook describes &smb4k; 3.1.x and to some extent earlier 
versions.</para>
-  <para>&smb4k; is an advanced network neighborhood browser and <ulink 
url="http://www.samba.org";>Samba</ulink> share mounting utility. It provides 
many handy features that ease your life in a mostly &Windows;-dominated network 
environment:</para>
+  <para>&smb4k; is an advanced network neighborhood browser and <ulink 
url="http://www.samba.org";>Samba</ulink> share mounting utility. It provides 
many handy features that ease your life in a &Windows;-dominated network 
environment:</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem><para>Scanning for (active) workgroups, hosts, and shares using 
&Samba;'s client library, DNS Service Discovery (DNS-SD) and, optionally, Web 
Services Dynamic Discovery (WS-Discovery)</para></listitem>
@@ -63,17 +63,17 @@
     <listitem><para>Access to the files of a mounted share using a file 
manager or terminal</para></listitem>
     <listitem><para>Auto-detection of external mounts and 
unmounts</para></listitem>
     <listitem><para>Remounting of previously used shares on program 
start</para></listitem>
-    <listitem><para>Miscellaneous infos about remote network items and mounted 
shares</para></listitem>
+    <listitem><para>Miscellaneous info about remote network items and mounted 
shares</para></listitem>
     <listitem><para>Network search</para></listitem>
     <listitem><para>Preview of the contents of a remote share</para></listitem>
     <listitem><para>Default login</para></listitem>
-    <listitem><para>Special handling of homes shares</para></listitem>
+    <listitem><para>Special handling of home shares</para></listitem>
     <listitem><para>Ability to bookmark favorite shares</para></listitem>
     <listitem><para>System tray widget</para></listitem>
     <listitem><para>Support of advanced mount options</para></listitem>
     <listitem><para>Support of printer shares</para></listitem>
     <listitem><para>&kwallet5; support</para></listitem>
-    <listitem><para>Synchronization of a remote share with a local copy and 
vice versa</para></listitem>
+    <listitem><para>Synchronization of a remote share with a local copy, and 
vice versa</para></listitem>
     <listitem><para>Ability to define custom options for individual servers 
and shares</para></listitem>
     <listitem><para>Hardware support through the &solid; device integration 
framework, the &kdbusaddons; convenience classes and the &Qt; Network 
module</para></listitem>
     <listitem><para>Wake-On-LAN capabilities</para></listitem>
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
     <listitem><para>Profiles for different network neighborhood 
setups</para></listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
 
-  <para>If you encounter problems while using &smb4k;, please post a help 
request to our <ulink 
url="https://sourceforge.net/p/smb4k/discussion/help/";>Help</ulink> forum. In 
case you find a bug, please report it to our <ulink 
url="https://bugs.kde.org/enter_bug.cgi?format=guided&amp;product=smb4k";>bug 
tracker</ulink>. For discussions about &smb4k;-related topics, there is the 
<ulink url="https://sourceforge.net/p/smb4k/discussion/general/";>General 
Discussion</ulink> forum and we invite every user to participate.</para>
+  <para>If you encounter problems while using &smb4k;, please post a help 
request to our <ulink 
url="https://sourceforge.net/p/smb4k/discussion/help/";>Help</ulink> forum. In 
case you find a bug, please report it to our <ulink 
url="https://bugs.kde.org/enter_bug.cgi?format=guided&amp;product=smb4k";>bug 
tracker</ulink>. For discussions about &smb4k;-related topics, there is the 
<ulink url="https://sourceforge.net/p/smb4k/discussion/general/";>General 
Discussion</ulink> forum, and we invite every user to participate.</para>
 </chapter>
 
 <!-- 
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
   <sect1 id="running_smb4k" >
     <title>Running &smb4k;</title>
     
-    <para>You can either launch &smb4k; from the K menu or from <ulink 
url="https://userbase.kde.org/Plasma/Krunner";>&krunner;</ulink> by typing 
<userinput><command>smb4k</command></userinput>. &smb4k; comes with a <link 
linkend="plasmoid">&plasmoid;</link> for better desktop integration. It can be 
added as widget to the desktop or panel.</para>
+    <para>You can either launch &smb4k; from the K menu or from <ulink 
url="https://userbase.kde.org/Plasma/Krunner";>&krunner;</ulink> by typing 
<userinput><command>smb4k</command></userinput>. &smb4k; comes with a <link 
linkend="plasmoid">&plasmoid;</link> for better desktop integration. It can be 
added as a widget to the desktop or panel.</para>
 
     <para>If the system is missing some of the programs &smb4k; needs to 
operate properly, it notifies the user:</para>
     
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@
   <sect1 id="mainwindow_overview">
     <title>The Main Window</title>
   
-    <para>On the first start-up, the main window of &smb4k; looks similar to 
the one shown below. The network neighborhood browser (<guilabel>Network 
Neighborhood</guilabel>) and the mounted shares view (<guilabel>Mounted 
Shares</guilabel>) are arranged in a tab widget. Above them the menubar and 
toolbar are located. Below them you find the status bar.</para>
+    <para>On the first start-up, the main window of &smb4k; looks similar to 
the one shown below. The network neighborhood browser (<guilabel>Network 
Neighborhood</guilabel>) and the mounted shares view (<guilabel>Mounted 
Shares</guilabel>) are arranged in a tab widget. Above them the menubar and 
toolbar are located. Below them you will see the status bar.</para>
     
     <screenshot id="mainwindow_overview_screenshot">
       <screeninfo>Screenshot of the main window</screeninfo>
@@ -130,8 +130,8 @@
       </mediaobject>
     </screenshot>
 
-    <para>The toolbar contains some of the main actions, like 
<guimenuitem>Configure &smb4k;</guimenuitem> and 
<guimenuitem>Quit</guimenuitem>. It also dynamically loads the actions of the 
dock widget that currently has got the focus. For additional information, 
please have a look at the sections discussing the <link 
linkend="network_neighborhood_browser">network neighborhood browser</link> and 
<link linkend="shares_view">mounted shares view</link>.</para>
-    <para>The status bar gives some information about the current status of 
&smb4k;. If the application is processing a user request (&eg; mounting a 
share), a descriptive message is displayed in the leftmost section and a 
progress bar is shown with a busy indicator. The two icons on the right hand 
side indicate if there are shares mounted (network folder icon) and the status 
of the authentication system (wallet or key icon).</para>
+    <para>The toolbar contains some of the main actions, like 
<guimenuitem>Configure &smb4k;</guimenuitem> and 
<guimenuitem>Quit</guimenuitem>. It also dynamically loads the actions of the 
dock widget that currently has the focus. For additional information, please 
take a look at the sections discussing the <link 
linkend="network_neighborhood_browser">network neighborhood browser</link> and 
<link linkend="shares_view">mounted shares view</link>.</para>
+    <para>The status bar provides some information about the current status of 
&smb4k;. If the application is processing a user request (&eg; mounting a 
share), a descriptive message is displayed in the leftmost section and a 
progress bar is shown with a busy indicator. The two icons on the right hand 
side indicate if there are shares mounted (network folder icon) and the status 
of the authentication system (wallet or key icon).</para>
     <para>If the dock widgets are arranged as tabs, the user gets additional 
visual feedback. Each time a share is mounted or unmounted, the 
<guilabel>Mounted Shares</guilabel> tab is highlighted for a few seconds.</para>
     <para>The main window is highly configurable. You can hide or show all 
tabbed widgets (<menuchoice><guimenu>Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Dock 
Widgets</guimenuitem></menuchoice>). They can also be dragged around with the 
mouse and docked to different areas in the main window. You can even detach 
them from the main window. The status bar and the toolbars can be hidden or 
shown by toggling the menu entry 
<menuchoice><guimenu>Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Show 
Statusbar</guimenuitem></menuchoice> and the ones under 
<menuchoice><guimenu>Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Toolbars 
Shown</guimenuitem></menuchoice>, respectively.</para>
   </sect1>
@@ -143,8 +143,8 @@
   <sect1 id="network_neighborhood_browser">
     <title>The Network Neighborhood Browser</title>
 
-    <para>The interaction with the network neighborhood is done with the 
<guilabel>Network Neighborhood</guilabel> browser. It contains all network 
items &#8212; &ie; workgroups, servers, and shares &#8212; &smb4k; was able to 
find. They are organized in a network tree, and you can navigate through it by 
either clicking the control next to the item name or by executing the item 
itself.</para>
-    <para>In the network tree, the master browser of each workgroup or domain 
is highlighted by blue font color, if it was detected (&eg; when using DNS-SD, 
the master browser of a &Windows; domain is not recognized). Mounted shares are 
marked with the respective folder icon and an italic font.</para>
+    <para>The interaction with the network neighborhood is done with the 
<guilabel>Network Neighborhood</guilabel> browser. It contains all network 
items &#8212; &ie; workgroups, servers, and shares &#8212; &smb4k; was able to 
find. They are organized in a network tree, and you can navigate through it by 
either clicking the control next to the item's name or by executing the item 
itself.</para>
+    <para>In the network tree, the master browser in each workgroup or domain 
is highlighted by a blue font color, if it was detected (&eg; when using 
DNS-SD, the master browser of a &Windows; domain is not recognized). Mounted 
shares are marked with the respective folder icon and an italic font.</para>
 
     <screenshot>
       <screeninfo>Screenshot of the network neighborhood browser</screeninfo>
@@ -163,9 +163,9 @@
     <sect2 id="network_neighborhood_browser_browsing">
       <title>Browsing</title>
 
-      <para>&smb4k; automatically scans the network neighborhood for active 
workgroups and domains on start-up and presents them in the network 
neighborhood browser. For this purpose it uses &Samba;'s client library, <ulink 
url="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zero-configuration_networking#DNS-SD";>DNS 
Service Discovery (DNS-SD)</ulink> and, optionally, <ulink 
url="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/WS-Discovery";>Web Services Dynamic Discovery 
(WS-Discovery)</ulink>. The way &smb4k; browses the network neighborhood can be 
adjusted in the <link 
linkend="configuration_page_network_basic_settings_browse_settings"><guilabel>Network</guilabel>
 configuration page</link>.</para>
-      <para>&smb4k; uses a traditional scan mode, where initially only 
workgroups and domains are looked up and scans are only made when necessary 
&#8212; &ie; when you execute a network item &#8212;. Due to the use of DNS-SD, 
you will most likely find a domain called <emphasis>LOCAL</emphasis> in the 
network neighborhood browser. This is the default local DNS domain used by 
services like <ulink 
url="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Avahi_(software)">Avahi</ulink> and not an 
actual &Windows; domain. Opening a domain or workgroup item shows the servers 
belonging to it. If you want to access the shares of one of the servers, you 
have to open the desired server.</para>
-      <para>There is also the possibility to wake up sleeping servers prior to 
scanning the network neighborhood (Wake-On-LAN). If this feature is enabled, 
&smb4k; sends a magic package to each server that is to be woken up and waits 
the defined time until it starts the lookup of the workgroups and domains. The 
Wake-On-LAN setting can be turned on in the <link 
linkend="configuration_page_network_wake_on_lan_settings">configuration 
dialog</link>. The servers that should to be woken up have to be defined in the 
<link linkend="network_neighborhood_browser_defining_custom_options">Custom 
Options</link> dialog.</para>
+      <para>&smb4k; automatically scans the network neighborhood for active 
workgroups and domains on start-up, and presents them in the network 
neighborhood browser. For this purpose it uses &Samba;'s client library, <ulink 
url="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zero-configuration_networking#DNS-SD";>DNS 
Service Discovery (DNS-SD)</ulink> and, optionally, <ulink 
url="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/WS-Discovery";>Web Services Dynamic Discovery 
(WS-Discovery)</ulink>. The way &smb4k; browses the network neighborhood can be 
adjusted in the <link 
linkend="configuration_page_network_basic_settings_browse_settings"><guilabel>Network</guilabel>
 configuration page</link>.</para>
+      <para>&smb4k; uses a traditional scan mode, where initially only 
workgroups and domains are looked up and scans are only made when necessary 
&#8212; &ie;, when you execute a network item. Due to the use of DNS-SD, you 
will most likely find a domain called <emphasis>LOCAL</emphasis> in the network 
neighborhood browser. This is the default local DNS domain used by services 
like <ulink url="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Avahi_(software)">Avahi</ulink> 
and not an actual &Windows; domain. Opening a domain or workgroup item shows 
the servers belonging to it. If you want to access the shares of one of the 
servers, you must open the desired server.</para>
+      <para>There is also the possibility to wake up sleeping servers prior to 
scanning the network neighborhood (Wake-On-LAN). If this feature is enabled, 
&smb4k; sends a magic package to each server that is to be awakened, then waits 
the defined time until it starts to look up the workgroups and domains. The 
Wake-On-LAN setting can be turned on in the <link 
linkend="configuration_page_network_wake_on_lan_settings">configuration 
dialog</link>. The servers that should be awakened must be defined in the <link 
linkend="network_neighborhood_browser_defining_custom_options">Custom 
Options</link> dialog.</para>
     </sect2>
     
 <!--
@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@
     <sect2 id="network_neighborhood_browser_searching">
       <title>Searching</title>
       
-      <para>To search the network neighborhood for shares that contain a 
certain search item, execute the <menuchoice><shortcut><keycombo 
action="simul">&Ctrl; 
<keycap>F</keycap></keycombo></shortcut><guimenuitem>Search</guimenuitem></menuchoice>
 action (see also the <link 
linkend="network_neighborhood_browser_actions_popup_menu">Actions an Popup 
Menu</link> section below). The search toolbar opens at the bottom of the 
network neighborhood browser.</para>
+      <para>To search the network neighborhood for shares that contain a 
certain search item, execute the <menuchoice><shortcut><keycombo 
action="simul">&Ctrl; 
<keycap>F</keycap></keycombo></shortcut><guimenuitem>Search</guimenuitem></menuchoice>
 action (see also the <link 
linkend="network_neighborhood_browser_actions_popup_menu">Actions and Popup 
Menu</link> section below). The search toolbar opens at the bottom of the 
network neighborhood browser.</para>
       
       <screenshot>
         <screeninfo>Screenshot of the network neighborhood browser with 
visible search toolbar</screeninfo>
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@
         </mediaobject>
       </screenshot>
       
-      <para>Enter the search term in the line edit and press the &Enter; key 
or click the <guibutton>Search</guibutton> button. &smb4k; starts to search the 
entire network neighborhood. When the search finished, all shares matching the 
search term are highlighted (selected). If you would like to do something with 
<emphasis>all</emphasis> discovered shares (&eg; mount or preview), you can 
immediately do this now. Otherwise, you can use the <guibutton>Up</guibutton> 
and <guibutton>Down</guibutton> buttons to jump to the individual search 
results. The <guibutton>Clear</guibutton> button can be used to clear the 
search. To close the search toolbar, press the <guibutton>Close</guibutton> 
button.</para>
+      <para>Enter the search term in the line edit and press the &Enter; key, 
or click the <guibutton>Search</guibutton> button. &smb4k; starts to search the 
entire network neighborhood. When the search is finished, all shares matching 
the search term are highlighted (selected). If you would like to do something 
with <emphasis>all</emphasis> discovered shares (&eg; mount or preview), you 
can immediately do this now. Otherwise, you can use the 
<guibutton>Up</guibutton> and <guibutton>Down</guibutton> buttons to jump to 
the individual search results. The <guibutton>Clear</guibutton> button can be 
used to clear the search. To close the search toolbar, press the 
<guibutton>Close</guibutton> button.</para>
     </sect2>
 
 <!-- 
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@
     <sect2 id="network_neighborhood_browser_actions_popup_menu">
       <title>Actions and Popup Menu</title>
 
-      <para>For the network neighborhood browser several actions are defined. 
They are present in the menubar under <guimenu>Network</guimenu>, in the 
toolbar and the popup menu. The following ones are available:</para>
+      <para>Several actions are defined for the network neighborhood browser. 
They are present in the menubar under <guimenu>Network</guimenu>, in the 
toolbar, and in the popup menu. The following actions are available:</para>
     
       <variablelist>
         <varlistentry>
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@
             </menuchoice>
           </term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Scan the whole network neighborhood, the highlighted 
workgroup/domain or computer for new entries. This action is visible by default 
and will be replaced by the <guimenuitem>Abort</guimenuitem> action if a 
network scan is running.</para>
+            <para>Scan the whole network neighborhood, the highlighted 
workgroup/domain, or the computer for new entries. This action is visible by 
default and will be replaced by the <guimenuitem>Abort</guimenuitem> action if 
a network scan is running.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
         <varlistentry>
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@
             </menuchoice>
           </term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Abort any running process of the network neighborhood 
browser. This action is invisible by default and will only be visible instead 
of the <guimenuitem>Scan Network|Workgroup|Computer</guimenuitem> action when a 
network scan is running.</para>
+            <para>Abort any running process of the network neighborhood 
browser. This action is invisible by default and will only be visible (instead 
of the <guimenuitem>Scan Network|Workgroup|Computer</guimenuitem> action) when 
a network scan is running.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
         <varlistentry>
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@
             </menuchoice>
           </term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Search the network neighborhood for a specified search term. 
Activating this action opens the search toolbar where you can enter the search 
term and start the search.</para>
+            <para>Search the network neighborhood for a specified term. 
Activating this action opens the search toolbar, where you can enter the search 
term and start the search.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>        
         <varlistentry>
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@
             </menuchoice>
           </term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Open the <link 
linkend="network_neighborhood_browser_mounting">dialog</link> for mounting 
shares "manually". This feature may be needed if &smb4k; cannot find a server 
from which you want to mount a certain shared resource.</para>
+            <para>Open the <link 
linkend="network_neighborhood_browser_mounting">dialog</link> for mounting 
shares "manually". This feature may be needed if &smb4k; cannot find the server 
from which you want to mount a certain shared resource.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
         <varlistentry>
@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@
             </menuchoice>
           </term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Mount the selected remote share. By default and if you 
clicked anything different than a share with type "Disk" or "IPC", this action 
is disabled. If you selected a mounted share, this action is replaced by the 
<guimenuitem>Unmount</guimenuitem> action.</para>
+            <para>Mount the selected remote share. By default, and if you 
clicked anything different than a share with type "Disk" or "IPC", this action 
is disabled. If you selected a mounted share, this action is replaced by the 
<guimenuitem>Unmount</guimenuitem> action.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
         <varlistentry>

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