On Wed, Apr 8, 2015 at 3:39 AM, Paweł Abramowicz <[email protected]> wrote: > The updated phrases are all great, but I would adjust these two: > >> Listen to your music or watch movies in Kubuntu. Simply select a song or a >> movie; if you use restricted formats such as MP3, installation is two >> clicks, usually during installation. > Installation is two clicks, but the second word 'installation' doesn't say > much about the moment it takes place. How about "installation is two clicks, > usually while you set up your system"? > >> Amarok, Kubuntu’s default music player, has an intuitive and friendly >> interface. Play the music you love, and discover new music. Make playlists >> for parties, to burn to CDs, listen to local radio, or in a language you are >> practicing. The possibilities are endless. > That "in a language" part doesn't quite chime in with the rest of the > sentence for me. Maybe we should add something like "or phrases in a > language you are practicing" (or "learning"; also: is this comma before "or" > necessary?) > > Anyways, great update to the feature tour! > > Paweł Abramowicz
Good suggestions, Pawel. My main concern is getting rid of incorrect text first, and extra words and phrases second. The images are GREAT; fewer words are better. Valorie > 2015-04-08 11:31 GMT+02:00 Valorie Zimmerman <[email protected]>: >> >> I don't know a better way to suggest my edits; please advise if there >> is a better way. >> >> "Browse your files with an easy to use interface" > Browse your files >> easily >> >> >> dolphin >> >> "Easily find that important Document, Picture, or Video quickly." > >> Quickly find your important document, photo or video. (no full-stop, >> or all full-stops: be consistent) >> >> "With useful features such as Split View, Editable Location, a >> built-in Terminal and many others." > Split View, Editable Location, a >> built-in Terminal and many other useful features >> >> "Browse images with a beautiful interface" > Browse images >> >> >> gwenview >> >> "Pictures are an important part of today’s life, with hundreds of >> photos of family and friends. >> >> That’s why we think that you should be able to view them easily using >> a pretty interface. >> >> Kubuntu comes with graphic applications designed for the home user. >> You can browse, view, share and even enhance your pictures." > >> >> Images are an important part of modern life. Kubuntu graphic >> applications make it easy to browse, share and enhance your photos. >> >> >> "Seamlessly open documents" > Open and read documents easily >> >> >> okular >> >> "Open PDF, Dejavu, PS, DVI and more out-of-the-box. >> >> Annotate documents and fill in forms with Okular, the universal document >> viewer. >> >> Okular reads eBooks too!" > Open PDF, Dejavu, PS, DVI and more, >> annotate documents and fill in forms, and even read eBooks with >> Ocular, the universal document reader. >> >> >> >> Surf the Internet with Firefox >> >> >> firefox >> >> "Kubuntu comes with the award-winning Firefox web browser by default. >> >> More open-source browsers are available through Kubuntu’s software >> repositories." > no change >> >> Productivity suite >> >> >> kontact >> >> "Kontact is the productivity suite that does it all: email, >> calendaring, address books, to-do lists, RSS feed aggregation and >> personal time tracking. >> >> Never forget important meetings with Kontact’s reminder service. >> >> Keep track of all your projects and print to-do lists with the task >> manager." > no change >> Chat right from the desktop with your friends >> >> >> kdetelepathy >> >> "KDE Instant Messenger, Kubuntu’s instant-messaging client, lets you >> chat with your friends over Facebook Chat, Google Talk, AIM, ICQ, >> Jabber, Messenger, Skype and many more from a single interface. >> >> KDE Instant Messenger comes packed with plugins that let you chat >> securely, translate incoming messages to your native language and >> more." >> >> > KDE Instant Messenger lets you chat with your friends over Facebook >> > Chat, Google Talk, AIM, ICQ, Jabber, Messenger, and Skype. Plus, you can >> > chat securely, and translate incoming messages to your native language. >> >> >> Multimedia made easy with Kubuntu >> >> >> dragon-player >> >> "Kubuntu comes built-in with a music and a movie player that are simple to >> use. >> >> Simply select a song or a movie and Kubuntu will take care of the rest. >> >> Kubuntu plays most music and video formats out the box; restricted >> formats such as MP3 are installed with two clicks when needed, usually >> during the installation process." >> >> > Listen to your music or watch movies in Kubuntu. Simply select a song or >> > a movie; if you use restricted formats such as MP3, installation is two >> > clicks, usually during installation. >> >> Music experienced on a different level >> >> amarok >> >> "Amarok, Kubuntu’s default music player, has an intuitive and friendly >> interface. >> >> It makes playing the music you love and discovering new music easier >> than ever before—and it looks good doing it! >> >> Add radio stations from your area, set up an alarm clock and burn >> music CDs directly from Amarok." > Set up an alarm clock? Burn CDs? >> Not since Amarok in KDE3, I think. >> >> How about: >> >> Amarok, Kubuntu’s default music player, has an intuitive and friendly >> interface. Play the music you love, and discover new music. Make >> playlists for parties, to burn to CDs, listen to local radio, or in a >> language you are practicing. The possibilities are endless. >> >> >> Complete and professional office suite >> >> >> libreoffice >> >> "Create professional documents, spreadsheets and presentations with >> LibreOffice. >> >> LibreOffice is compatible with all office applications including >> Microsoft Office. >> >> The big difference is that LibreOffice is free (and promises never to >> introduce Mr. Clippy)." - fine, no changes. >> >> >> Given my druthers, I wouldn't describe Libreoffice at all, since it is >> not KDE software, but we do offer it. >> >> Valorie -- kubuntu-devel mailing list [email protected] Modify settings or unsubscribe at: https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/kubuntu-devel
