After considerable thought, I am going to adopt Lewis Neal's suggested 
installation docs 
<https://groups.google.com/d/msg/leo-editor/cel28Tw2OMU/2fPo809EBQAJ> 
myself. I'll add them to LeoDocs.leo and update Leo's web site accordingly. 
This should happen later today. We can then discuss them here, in this 
thread.

*Aha*: outline structure (in LeoDocs.leo or in the online TOC) clarifies 
the issues *for me* enough so that I can proceed.

*Example*

The rest of this post discusses Matt's excellent PyPi instructions, which 
he added to LeoDocs.leo. You could call this part an Engineering Notebook 
entry.  Feel free to ignore.

The main problem I had was with a section I called "Optional: Test with 
TestPyPI".  Don't remember what the original headline was.  It was a child 
of the node "Build & publish a release".  Should this node be a child or 
should it follow the "Build & publish" node?

There was a problem either way.  Logically, testing would seem to follow 
building.  Otoh, this item was "subsidiary" because it was optional. And 
testing could be called part of the build process.

I finally saw that the real resolution to this dilemma was to rename the 
node to "Not recommended: Test with TestPyPI". Now it doesn't much matter 
so much *where* the node goes, because the "Not recommended" label is much 
stronger than the "Optional" prefix.  I chose *not* to make this node a 
child node, because I wanted to emphasize the step-by-step nature of the 
recipe.

*Summary*

Outline structure is the best overall guide.  This structure can then 
suggest wording improvements that sidestep structure-related dilemmas.

Edward

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