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Author: matthew Date: 2005-03-14 13:30:17 -0700 (Mon, 14 Mar 2005) New Revision: 4758
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml trunk/BOOK/chapter06/hotplug.xml Log: Typo and rewording of hotplug filelist
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml 2005-03-14 20:23:24 UTC (rev 4757) +++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml 2005-03-14 20:30:17 UTC (rev 4758) @@ -82,6 +82,9 @@ </itemizedlist> </listitem>
+<listitem><para>March 14, 2005 [matt]: Fix typos, and reword some of the hotplug explanations for (hopefully) improved clarity</para> +</listitem> + <listitem><para>March 14, 2005 [matt]: Upgraded to gettext-0.14.3</para> </listitem>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/hotplug.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/hotplug.xml 2005-03-14 20:23:24 UTC (rev 4757)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/hotplug.xml 2005-03-14 20:30:17 UTC (rev 4758)
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
<listitem>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug"><primary
sortas="b-hotplug">hotplug</primary></indexterm>
-<para>This script is called by default by Linux kernel when something
+<para>This script is called by default by the Linux kernel when something
changes in its internal state (e.g., a new device is added or removed).</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -95,14 +95,12 @@
<listitem>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-rc"><primary
sortas="d-/etc/hotplug/*.rc">/etc/hotplug/*.rc</primary></indexterm>
-<para>These scripts are used for cold plugging, i.e., detection and other
-specific actions upon hardware already present during system startup. -They are called by the <filename>hotplug</filename> initscript that comes
-from the LFS-Bootscripts package.
-The <command>*.rc</command>
-scripts try to recover hotplug events that were lost during system boot
-because, e.g., the root filesystem was not mounted by the kernel.
-</para>
+<para>These scripts are used for cold plugging, i.e., detecting and acting upon
+hardware already present during system startup. They are called by the
+<filename>hotplug</filename> initscript that comes from the LFS-Bootscripts
+package. The <command>*.rc</command> scripts try to recover hotplug events that
+were lost during system boot because, for example, the root filesystem was not
+mounted by the kernel.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -113,8 +111,8 @@ sortas="d-/etc/hotplug/*.agent">/etc/hotplug/*.agent</primary></indexterm> <para>These scripts are called by <command>hotplug</command> in response to different types of hotplug events generated by the kernel. -Their action is to insert corresponding kernel modules and call user-provided -scripts, if any. +Their action is to insert corresponding kernel modules and call any +user-provided scripts. </para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -124,7 +122,7 @@ <listitem> <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-functions"><primary sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/hotplug.functions">/etc/hotplug/hotplug.functions</primary></indexterm> -<para>This file contains common functions used by other scripts in Hotplug +<para>This file contains common functions used by other scripts in the Hotplug package. </para> </listitem> @@ -135,8 +133,8 @@ <listitem> <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-blacklist"><primary sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/blacklist">/etc/hotplug/blacklist</primary></indexterm> -<para>This file contains the list of modules that should never be -inserted into the kernel by hotplug scripts. +<para>This file contains the list of modules that should never be inserted into +the kernel by the hotplug scripts. </para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -146,8 +144,7 @@ <listitem> <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-subdirs"><primary sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/{pci,usb}">/etc/hotplug/{pci,usb}</primary></indexterm> -<para>These directories are supposed to contain user-written handlers for -hotplug events. +<para>These directories contain user-written handlers for hotplug events. </para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -158,7 +155,7 @@ <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-usb.usermap"><primary sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/usb.usermap">/etc/hotplug/usb.usermap</primary></indexterm> <para>This file contains rules that determine which user-defined handlers to -call for each USB device, based on its vendor, id and other attributes. +call for each USB device, based on its vendor ID and other attributes. </para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -168,7 +165,7 @@ <listitem> <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-events"><primary sortas="e-/var/log/hotplug/events">/var/log/hotplug/events</primary></indexterm> -<para>This file contains all the events since bootup that hotplug has called. +<para>This file contains all the events that hotplug has called since bootup. </para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -178,10 +175,9 @@ <listitem> <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-hotplug.d"><primary sortas="e-/etc/hotplug.d">/etc/hotplug.d</primary></indexterm> -<para>This directory contains programs (or symlinks to them) -that are interested in receiving hotplug events. E.g., -<application>Udev</application> puts its symlink here during installation. -</para> +<para>This directory contains programs (or symlinks to them) that are interested +in receiving hotplug events. For example, <application>Udev</application> puts +its symlink here during installation.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry>
@@ -190,9 +186,8 @@ <listitem> <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-firmware"><primary sortas="e-/lib/firmware">/lib/firmware</primary></indexterm> -<para>This directory contains the firmware for devices that -need to have there firmware loaded before use. -</para> +<para>This directory contains the firmware for devices that need to have their +firmware loaded before use.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry>
Thanx Matt!!!
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