Author: manuel
Date: 2005-04-12 14:32:00 -0600 (Tue, 12 Apr 2005)
New Revision: 4940

Modified:
   branches/multi-arch/BOOK/chapter01/administrativa.xml
   branches/multi-arch/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
   branches/multi-arch/BOOK/chapter04/aboutsbus.xml
   branches/multi-arch/BOOK/general.ent
Log:
Ported r4933 and r4935 from trunk: Small redaction changes.

Modified: branches/multi-arch/BOOK/chapter01/administrativa.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/multi-arch/BOOK/chapter01/administrativa.xml       2005-04-12 
20:24:04 UTC (rev 4939)
+++ branches/multi-arch/BOOK/chapter01/administrativa.xml       2005-04-12 
20:32:00 UTC (rev 4940)
@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
 
 <para>If during the building of the LFS system you encounter any
 errors, have any questions, or think there is a typo in the book,
-please start by consulting the Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) at
-<ulink url="&faq-root;"/>.</para>
+please start by consulting the Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) 
+that are located at <ulink url="&faq-root;"/>.</para>
 </sect2>
 
 <sect2 id="ch-scatter-maillists" xreflabel="Chapter 1 - Mailing Lists">
@@ -66,8 +66,7 @@
 <title>References</title>
 
 <para>For additional information on the packages, useful tips are
-available at
-<ulink
+available in the LFS Package Reference page at <ulink
 url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/~matthew/LFS-references.html"/>.</para>
 </sect2>
 

Modified: branches/multi-arch/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/multi-arch/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml    2005-04-12 20:24:04 UTC 
(rev 4939)
+++ branches/multi-arch/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml    2005-04-12 20:32:00 UTC 
(rev 4940)
@@ -84,6 +84,14 @@
 <listitem><para>Changelog Entries:</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
+<listitem><para>April 12, 2005 [manuel]</para>
+<itemizedlist>
+<listitem><para>Fixed: Arch: All - Small redaction changes ported from 
trunk.</para></listitem>
+</itemizedlist>
+</listitem>
+</itemizedlist>
+
+<itemizedlist>
 <listitem><para>April 11, 2005 [manuel]</para>
 <itemizedlist>
 <listitem><para>Fixed: Arch: All - Tags and text corrections ported from 
trunk.</para></listitem>

Modified: branches/multi-arch/BOOK/chapter04/aboutsbus.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/multi-arch/BOOK/chapter04/aboutsbus.xml    2005-04-12 20:24:04 UTC 
(rev 4939)
+++ branches/multi-arch/BOOK/chapter04/aboutsbus.xml    2005-04-12 20:32:00 UTC 
(rev 4940)
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
 highly accurate for Symmetric Multi-Processor (SMP)-based machines.</para>
 
 <para>To view actual timings for a number of specific machines, we recommend
-<ulink url="&lfs-root;~bdubbs/"/>.</para>
+The LinuxFromScratch SBU Home Page at <ulink url="&lfs-root;~bdubbs/"/>.</para>
 
 <para>In general, SBUs are not very accurate because they depend on many
 factors, not just the GCC version. They are provided

Modified: branches/multi-arch/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- branches/multi-arch/BOOK/general.ent        2005-04-12 20:24:04 UTC (rev 
4939)
+++ branches/multi-arch/BOOK/general.ent        2005-04-12 20:32:00 UTC (rev 
4940)
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "7.0-multiarch-20050411">
+<!ENTITY version "7.0-multiarch-20050412">
 <!ENTITY version-x86 "&version;-x86">
 <!ENTITY version-alpha "&version;-alpha">
 <!ENTITY version-ppc "&version;-PowerPC">
 <!ENTITY version-raq2 "&version;-RaQ2">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "April 11, 2005">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "April 12, 2005">
 <!ENTITY milestone "7.0">
 
 <!ENTITY lfs-root "http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/";>

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