http://bugs.linuxfromscratch.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1568

           Summary: Section 8.3.1 nitpick
           Product: Linux From Scratch
           Version: TESTING
          Platform: All
        OS/Version: Linux
            Status: UNCONFIRMED
          Severity: trivial
          Priority: P5
         Component: Book
        AssignedTo: [email protected]
        ReportedBy: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
         QAContact: [email protected]


About halfway or so down there is a paragraph:

"LFS bootscripts make the assumption that either both ?Support for Host-side 
USB? and ?USB device filesystem? have been compiled directly into the kernel,
or that neither is compiled at all. Bootscripts will not work properly if it
is a module (usbcore.ko)."

1. s/LFS bootscripts/LFS Bootscripts/ (assuming it is being used as a proper 
noun)

2. "that either both" is confusing and hard to understand. Removing "either"
makes this sentence much easier to understand.



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