Author: matthew
Date: 2006-05-30 11:06:37 -0600 (Tue, 30 May 2006)
New Revision: 7635
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/chapter06/introduction.xml
trunk/BOOK/general.ent
Log:
Textual corrections from Chris Staub - dependency information is now in the
appendix, not in chapter 6. Specific compiler optimisations are not provided
so remove mentioning them.
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/introduction.xml 2006-05-28 11:25:43 UTC (rev
7634)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/introduction.xml 2006-05-30 17:06:37 UTC (rev
7635)
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
followed by concise descriptions of each program and library the package
installed.</para>
- <para>If using the compiler optimizations provided in this chapter, please
+ <para>If using compiler optimizations, please
review the optimization hint at <ulink url="&hints-root;optimization.txt"/>.
Compiler optimizations can make a program run slightly faster, but they may
also cause compilation difficulties and problems when running the program.
@@ -49,10 +49,9 @@
<para>Before the installation instructions, each installation page provides
information about the package, including a concise description of what it
- contains, approximately how long it will take to build, how much disk space
- is required during this building process, and any other packages needed to
- successfully build the package. Following the installation instructions,
- there is a list of programs and libraries (along with brief descriptions of
- these) that the package installs.</para>
+ contains, approximately how long it will take to build, and how much disk
+ space is required during this building process. Following the installation
+ instructions, there is a list of programs and libraries (along with brief
+ descriptions of these) that the package installs.</para>
</sect1>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent 2006-05-28 11:25:43 UTC (rev 7634)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent 2006-05-30 17:06:37 UTC (rev 7635)
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
<?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "SVN-20060528">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "May 28, 2006">
+<!ENTITY version "SVN-2006030">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "May 30, 2006">
<!ENTITY milestone "6.2">
<!ENTITY generic-version "development"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or
"x.y[-pre{x}]" -->
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