Hi, As usual, I report some typos I saw, among these I think the 1st is the most important for the understanding.
Le lundi 01 août 2011 à 20:15 -0600, [email protected] a écrit : > Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter07/bootscripts.xml > =================================================================== > --- trunk/BOOK/chapter07/bootscripts.xml 2011-07-17 19:17:28 UTC (rev > 9573) > +++ trunk/BOOK/chapter07/bootscripts.xml 2011-08-02 02:15:42 UTC (rev > 9574) > > @@ -325,7 +324,7 @@ > <term><command>udev_retry</command></term> > <listitem> > <para>Retries failed udev uevents, and copies generated rules > - files from <filename class="directory">/dev/.udev</filename> to > + files from to > <filename class="directory">/etc/udev/rules.d</filename> if > required</para> > <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts udev-retry-bootscripts"> > <primary sortas="d-udev-retry">udev_retry</primary> > + > </sect1> > > Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter07/network.xml > =================================================================== > --- trunk/BOOK/chapter07/network.xml 2011-07-17 19:17:28 UTC (rev 9573) > +++ trunk/BOOK/chapter07/network.xml 2011-08-02 02:15:42 UTC (rev 9574) > @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ > <sect1 id="ch-scripts-network"> > - <quote>xyz</quote> is a network interface name. Inside this directory > - would be files defining the attributes to this interface, such as its IP > - address(es), subnet masks, and so forth.</para> > + depends on the files in <filename > + class="directory">/etc/sysconfig/</filename>. This directory should > + contain a file for each interface to be configured, such as > + <filename>ifconfig.xyz</filename>, where <quote>xyz</quote> is is Remove one "is". > +++ trunk/BOOK/chapter07/usage.xml 2011-08-02 02:15:42 UTC (rev 9574) > @@ -37,7 +37,80 @@ > 5: same as 4, it is usually used for GUI login (like X's > <command>xdm</command> or KDE's <command>kdm</command>) > 6: reboot the computer</literallayout> > > - <para>The command used to change run-levels is <command>init > + <sect2 id="conf-sysvinit" role="configuration"> > + <title>Configuring Sysvinit</title> > + > + <indexterm zone="conf-sysvinit"> > + <primary sortas="a-Sysvinit">Sysvinit</primary> > + <secondary>configuring</secondary> > + <para>As a convenience, the <command>rc</command> script reads a library of > + functions in <filename class="directory">/lib/boot/functions</filename>. > + This library also reads an optional configuration file, > + <filename>/etc/sysconfig/init_params</filename>. Any of the system > + configuration file parameters described in subsequent sections can be > + alternatively placed in this file allowing consolidation of all system > + parameters in thsi one file.</para> This > > Regards, > - Jean-Philippe MENGUAL Président de l'association traduc.org Coordinateur du projet Linux From Scratch Coordinateur au sein du projet Trad GNU de l'April Animateur suppléant du groupe de travail Accessibilité de l'April -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/lfs-book FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
