Author: matthew
Date: 2012-11-18 11:14:22 -0700 (Sun, 18 Nov 2012)
New Revision: 10046
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/chapter03/introduction.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter06/glibc.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter06/kmod.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter06/util-linux.xml
trunk/BOOK/general.ent
Log:
A couple of text updates. Thanks to Chris Staub for the patch. Fixes #3228.
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter03/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter03/introduction.xml 2012-11-14 18:26:10 UTC (rev
10045)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter03/introduction.xml 2012-11-18 18:14:22 UTC (rev
10046)
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
the correct packages are available before proceeding. Place that file in
<filename class="directory">$LFS/sources</filename> and run:</para>
-<screen role="nodump"><userinput>pushd $LFS/sources
+<screen role="nodump"><userinput>pushd $LFS/sources
md5sum -c md5sums
popd</userinput></screen>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/glibc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/glibc.xml 2012-11-14 18:26:10 UTC (rev 10045)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/glibc.xml 2012-11-18 18:14:22 UTC (rev 10046)
@@ -501,7 +501,7 @@
/usr/include/netrom, /usr/include/netrose, /usr/include/nfs,
/usr/include/protocols, /usr/include/rpc, /usr/include/rpcsvc,
/usr/include/sys, /usr/lib/audit, /usr/lib/gconv, /usr/lib/glibc,
- /usr/lib/locale, /usr/share/i18n, /usr/share/zoneinfo</seg>
+ /usr/lib/locale, /usr/share/i18n, /usr/share/zoneinfo, /var/db</seg>
</seglistitem>
</segmentedlist>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/kmod.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/kmod.xml 2012-11-14 18:26:10 UTC (rev 10045)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/kmod.xml 2012-11-18 18:14:22 UTC (rev 10046)
@@ -55,11 +55,9 @@
<title>The meaning of the configure options:</title>
<varlistentry>
- <term><parameter>lib* and --with-*</parameter></term>
+ <term><parameter>--with-*</parameter></term>
<listitem>
- <para>These options enable Kmod to handle compressed kernel modules.
- The shell variables are required in order for the xz and zlib headers
- and libraries to be found in the absence of pkg-config.</para>
+ <para>These options enable Kmod to handle compressed kernel
modules.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/util-linux.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/util-linux.xml 2012-11-14 18:26:10 UTC (rev 10045)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/util-linux.xml 2012-11-18 18:14:22 UTC (rev 10046)
@@ -69,8 +69,9 @@
<listitem>
<para>These switches disable building su, sulogin, and login. They
duplicate the same programs provided by <xref
- linkend='ch-system-shadow'/>. They also require <ulink
- url="&blfs-root;/view/svn/postlfs/linux-pam.html">Linux-PAM</ulink>
+ linkend='ch-system-shadow'/> and <xref
linkend='ch-system-sysvinit'/>.
+ They also require
+ <ulink
url="&blfs-root;/view/svn/postlfs/linux-pam.html">Linux-PAM</ulink>
which is not available in LFS.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent 2012-11-14 18:26:10 UTC (rev 10045)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent 2012-11-18 18:14:22 UTC (rev 10046)
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-<!ENTITY version "SVN-20121114">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "November 14, 2012">
+<!ENTITY version "SVN-20121118">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "November 18, 2012">
<!ENTITY copyrightdate "1999-2012"><!-- jhalfs needs a literal dash, not
– -->
<!ENTITY milestone "7.3">
<!ENTITY generic-version "development"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or
"x.y[-pre{x}]" -->
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