Author: matthew
Date: Sun Mar  3 08:11:07 2013
New Revision: 10185

Log:
Improve the tagging and placement of some post install instructions for DBus 
and Systemd.

Modified:
   branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
   branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter06/dbus.xml
   branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter06/systemd.xml
   branches/systemd/BOOK/general.ent

Modified: branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml       Sun Mar  3 07:54:41 
2013        (r10184)
+++ branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml       Sun Mar  3 08:11:07 
2013        (r10185)
@@ -37,6 +37,17 @@
 -->
 
     <listitem>
+      <para>2013-03-03</para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[matthew] - Improve the tagging and placement of some post
+          install instructions for DBus and Systemd. Thanks to Pierre Labastie
+          for the report.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
+    </listitem>
+
+    <listitem>
       <para>2013-03-01</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>

Modified: branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter06/dbus.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter06/dbus.xml    Sun Mar  3 07:54:41 2013        
(r10184)
+++ branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter06/dbus.xml    Sun Mar  3 08:11:07 2013        
(r10185)
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
 
     <para>Install the package:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput remap="install">make install
+<screen><userinput>make install
 dbus-uuidgen --ensure</userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>

Modified: branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter06/systemd.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter06/systemd.xml Sun Mar  3 07:54:41 2013        
(r10184)
+++ branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter06/systemd.xml Sun Mar  3 08:11:07 2013        
(r10185)
@@ -105,11 +105,6 @@
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">make install</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Create the <filename>/etc/machine-id</filename> file needed by
-    Journald:</para>
-
-<screen><userinput 
remap="install">systemd-machine-id-setup</userinput></screen>
-
     <para>Create the Sysvinit compatibility symlinks, so Systemd is used
     as the default init system:</para>
 
@@ -125,10 +120,15 @@
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">mkdir -pv 
/var/log/journal</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Remove reference to a non-existent group:</para>
+    <para>Remove a reference to a non-existent group:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">sed -i "s@0775 root lock@0755 root root@g" 
/usr/lib/tmpfiles.d/legacy.conf</userinput></screen>
 
+    <para>Create the <filename>/etc/machine-id</filename> file needed by
+    Journald:</para>
+
+<screen><userinput>systemd-machine-id-setup</userinput></screen>
+
   </sect2>
 
   <sect2 id="contents-systemd" role="content">

Modified: branches/systemd/BOOK/general.ent
==============================================================================
--- branches/systemd/BOOK/general.ent   Sun Mar  3 07:54:41 2013        (r10184)
+++ branches/systemd/BOOK/general.ent   Sun Mar  3 08:11:07 2013        (r10185)
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-<!ENTITY version "SYSTEMD-20130302">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "March 2, 2013">
+<!ENTITY version "SYSTEMD-20130303">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "March 3, 2013">
 <!ENTITY copyrightdate "1999-2013"><!-- jhalfs needs a literal dash, not 
&ndash; -->
 <!ENTITY milestone "7.3">
 <!ENTITY generic-version "systemd"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or 
"x.y[-pre{x}]" -->
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