Allard Welter wrote:
Section 7.4, last sentence (grammar and spelling):
in negligable -> is negligible
>
Section 7.4.1, second paragraph (tense):
Last two sentences should be past tense again (from: The devfs file
system also suffers from race ...) unless of course these problems are
still manifest in the present implementation in which case it reads a
little odd.
Whole section 7.4: The overall impression I have is that the book is
written in the impersonal. All of a sudden section 7.4 goes to third
person (and second). Not that I have anything against the more personal
approach, just pointing out an inconsistency.
Thanks for the feedback, will keep this one in mind on the next edit.
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