On 04/05/2016 09:53 PM, Greg Wright wrote:
I am about to (for the first time) send a complaint to a website (creativecommons.org) about there use of Flash and Analytics

Upon arrival on your site I was greated with the message to "Please install or update Flash" ... No. Please do not Promote the use of Freedom Restricting Technologies like Flash. Also Please Consider Liberating your sites JavaScript http://www.gnu.org/software/librejs/free-your-javascript.html documents how

Hows this?


Some recommendations (mostly copyedits) so that the message is easier to read:

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Upon arrival to your site, I was greeted with the message "Please install or update Flash".

... No.
Please do not promote the use of freedom-restricting technologies, like Flash.

Also please consider liberating your site's JavaScript.
This guide explains how: http://www.gnu.org/software/librejs/free-your-javascript.html
And for help, please contact: help-libr...@gnu.org

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I think your message is really good - very concise and direct. What email subject do you plan to use?


Best,
Dave

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