I am a native English speaker, so here are my 0.02:

On 2010-05-04 12:56, Ralf Wildenhues wrote:
-The following explanation may help to understand the above rules a bit
+The following explanation can help to understand the above rules a bit

Leave this as "may".

-drop-in replacement, but programs using the new version may use APIs not
+drop-in replacement, but programs using the new version can use APIs not

Again, "may".

-the new version may fail with ``unresolved symbols'' if linking against
+the new version might fail with ``unresolved symbols'' if linking against

OK.

-Programs may need to be changed, recompiled, relinked in order to use
+Programs might need to be changed, recompiled, relinked in order to use

I think this is OK as well.


Yaakov
Cygwin/X


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