CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/lilypond
Module name:    lilypond
Branch:         
Changes by:     Graham Percival <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>     05/08/16 00:33:29

Modified files:
        Documentation/user: putting.itely instrument-notation.itely 

Log message:
        Minor changes.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/lilypond/lilypond/Documentation/user/putting.itely.diff?tr1=1.5&tr2=1.6&r1=text&r2=text
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/lilypond/lilypond/Documentation/user/instrument-notation.itely.diff?tr1=1.49&tr2=1.50&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: lilypond/Documentation/user/instrument-notation.itely
diff -u lilypond/Documentation/user/instrument-notation.itely:1.49 
lilypond/Documentation/user/instrument-notation.itely:1.50
--- lilypond/Documentation/user/instrument-notation.itely:1.49  Sun Aug  7 
09:14:23 2005
+++ lilypond/Documentation/user/instrument-notation.itely       Tue Aug 16 
00:33:28 2005
@@ -1940,7 +1940,7 @@
 This is what the well known tune Amazing Grace looks like in bagpipe
 notation.
 
[EMAIL PROTECTED],verbatim,quote]
[EMAIL PROTECTED],quote]
 \include "bagpipe.ly"
 \layout {
   indent = 0.0\cm
Index: lilypond/Documentation/user/putting.itely
diff -u lilypond/Documentation/user/putting.itely:1.5 
lilypond/Documentation/user/putting.itely:1.6
--- lilypond/Documentation/user/putting.itely:1.5       Sun Jun 26 22:46:55 2005
+++ lilypond/Documentation/user/putting.itely   Tue Aug 16 00:33:28 2005
@@ -272,8 +272,9 @@
 @end lilypond
 
 That looks better, but it isn't quite big enough.  After experimenting
-with a few values, I think 2.3 is the best number.  I leave this as an
-exercise for the reader.
+with a few values, we think 2.3 is the best number.  We leave this as an
+exercise for the reader to modify the above example and view the output
+for themselves.
 
 @cindex extra-offset
 
@@ -291,8 +292,8 @@
 
 With @code{extra-offset}, the first number controls the horizontal
 movement (left is negative); the second number controls the vertial
-movement (up is positive).  After a bit of experimenting, I decided
-that these values look good
+movement (up is positive).  After a bit of experimenting, we decided
+that these values look good.
 
 @lilypond[quote,fragment,raggedright,verbatim,relative=2]
 \once \override TextScript #'extra-offset = #'( -1.6 . 1.0 )


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