Cameron Horsburgh escreveu:
Hmm, I'm still not happy with the first sentence! How about:
***
The initial inspiration for LilyPond came ten years ago when two
musician friends grew disappointed with the bland and boring look of
computer generated scores.
***
I used formatted iso. generated. GEnerated sounds a bit nerdy.
Also, the comma after 'improvements' should be replaced by a semi-colon.
rather a colon ?
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