http://codereview.appspot.com/3705042/diff/1/Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely File Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely (right):
http://codereview.appspot.com/3705042/diff/1/Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely#newcode2114 Documentation/learning/fundamental.itely:2114: objects to note heads, if you remove the @code{Note_heads_engraver} I'm not convinced that the comma is grammatical. How do you feel about semicolons? http://codereview.appspot.com/3705042/diff/1/Documentation/notation/repeats.itely File Documentation/notation/repeats.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/3705042/diff/1/Documentation/notation/repeats.itely#newcode150 Documentation/notation/repeats.itely:150: @rprogram{An extra staff appears}. Do not place bar checks outside Could this be in a separate @warning? I'd rather not have two totally distinct warnings in the same box. I also think it's a bit wordier than it needs to be -- I really want to keep warnings short, otherwise they lose their power. How about "Bar checks must be placed @emph{inside} the braces of each alternate block." ? ok, that's not quite the same thing (it says that you *must* use bar checks)... but please try to think of a reformulation along those lines. http://codereview.appspot.com/3705042/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel