minor stuff, one missing word.

http://codereview.appspot.com/4438054/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely
File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right):

http://codereview.appspot.com/4438054/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode2329
Documentation/notation/input.itely:2329: Displaying a music expression
in LilyPond notation can be
is the word 'notation' redundant?

http://codereview.appspot.com/4438054/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode2358
Documentation/notation/input.itely:2358: See @rextend{Displaying music
expressions}.
Would this be better as an @seealso? I am guessing there is some more
'stuff' to go in here else is there a need for an @node just for this?

http://codereview.appspot.com/4438054/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode2374
Documentation/notation/input.itely:2374: be jumbled together in the same
file.  The output looks like this:
is 'jumble' appropriate for non-English Speakers - suggest 'mixed'. :)

http://codereview.appspot.com/4438054/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode2386
Documentation/notation/input.itely:2386: The syntax is a tab-delimited
line, with at two fixed fields on
missing word I think
...with at *least* two fixed fields... (?)

http://codereview.appspot.com/4438054/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode2394
Documentation/notation/input.itely:2394: python.  This can be very
useful for researchers wishing to
too many 'This.. This...' run on the sentence thus:

...such as python, and can be ...

http://codereview.appspot.com/4438054/

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