Updated patch based on comments by Janek and Trevor.
http://codereview.appspot.com/6303095/diff/1/Documentation/music-glossary.tely File Documentation/music-glossary.tely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/6303095/diff/1/Documentation/music-glossary.tely#newcode4539 Documentation/music-glossary.tely:4539: jurisdictions of Orthodoxy and Byzantine-rite Catholicism. It is On 2012/06/18 07:41:55, janek wrote:
There should be two spaces after period that closes sentence (here and
in some
places in the second file).
Done. http://codereview.appspot.com/6303095/diff/1/Documentation/notation/ancient.itely File Documentation/notation/ancient.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/6303095/diff/1/Documentation/notation/ancient.itely#newcode41 Documentation/notation/ancient.itely:41: Gregorian notation. On 2012/06/18 08:06:15, Trevor Daniels wrote:
"... contexts for these styles." maybe.
Done. http://codereview.appspot.com/6303095/diff/1/Documentation/notation/ancient.itely#newcode2431 Documentation/notation/ancient.itely:2431: as the following excerpt demonstrates: On 2012/06/18 08:06:15, Trevor Daniels wrote:
Stop after the comma, and change that to a colon.
Done. http://codereview.appspot.com/6303095/diff/1/Documentation/notation/ancient.itely#newcode2464 Documentation/notation/ancient.itely:2464: There is only one clef used in Kievan notation (the Tse-fa-ut Clef). It is used to indicate the position of @code{c}, as in the following example: On 2012/06/18 08:06:15, Trevor Daniels wrote:
Stop after the comma, and change that to a colon.
Done. http://codereview.appspot.com/6303095/diff/1/Documentation/notation/ancient.itely#newcode2537 Documentation/notation/ancient.itely:2537: @end lilypond On 2012/06/18 08:06:15, Trevor Daniels wrote:
Rather than displaying the glyphs (which already appear in Appendix 8
and should
be referenced there) it would be better to move the following para
about
accidental style before this one and then show the use of accidentals
in context
in a bar of music.
Done. http://codereview.appspot.com/6303095/diff/1/Documentation/notation/ancient.itely#newcode2566 Documentation/notation/ancient.itely:2566: @end lilypond On 2012/06/18 08:06:15, Trevor Daniels wrote:
Could this example include a bar of music to show how the two fit
together? Maybe the last two examples should be merged? I'm not sure the Kievan bar line deserves a subsection all to itself. What do you think? http://codereview.appspot.com/6303095/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel