https://codereview.appspot.com/51460043/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
File Documentation/web/introduction.itexi (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/51460043/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode1138
Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1138: before they come up!
Occasionally new users are unnecessarily
I prefer keeping a paragraph break here, since that makes the next
sentence easier to see.

https://codereview.appspot.com/51460043/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode1139
Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1139: irritated by some aspects of
LilyPond's behaviour.  Please read
I suggest using "unnecessarily confused" rather than "irritated".

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